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Summer Fields


                                      Silent breeze in sleep
                                Acres of bronze threaded wheat
                                      Worship of sun's heat

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  1. Date: 6/25/2010 11:38:00 AM
    Wow, what a wonderfully refreshing image --- sleeping in the breeze, surrounded by a wheat field. Very nice haiku, Cuchi! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 9:47:00 PM
    Exceptional description! A scene of a stunning beauty, Celene! Great work. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 8:50:00 AM
    Sleeping in the wheat to avoid the sun's heat, how adoring! I would rather eat ambrosia for my meals and not bread. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 2:32:00 AM
    thank you btw for all your lovely & inspiring comments in my poems :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 2:31:00 AM
    this is really dreamy, Celene ;) --I totally loved that bronze threaded wheat--very descriptive--btw soup mail again...nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 11:39:00 AM
    Short and beautiful poetry and I rally enjoyed it alot. Enjoy your day.:)

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 10:41:00 AM
    The imagery of bronze threaded wheat, sleepy breeze in the heat is an excellent tribute to summer fields. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 2:10:00 AM
    A lovely summer haiku Celene, love that bronze-threaded wheat. I think once you have adjusted the format it will be a perfect work of art ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 9:10:00 PM
    I like this works for the message. Nice. BG

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 8:44:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 5:25:00 PM
    A fine invocation to summer

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 4:11:00 PM
    Smile! It seems as though "Your Priceless Heart" is happy here dear--Smile, and this "Always" makes my very own heart happy!!! ~ Smile, along with the fact, that I see that "Your Treasures" have quite a few new posted jewels of verse I am quite sure ~ Smile, let my eyes go behold "Their Splendors" now ~ "My Love to 'You Always, & Beyond,'" John! ~

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 4:05:00 PM
    Smile! What an extremely serene and beautiful picture "Your Beauty" paints here dear!!! ~ Smile, "Hello Beyond Beautiful Celene Cresent!!!!" ~ I'm in out of town right now; left for the weekend yesterday early eve and, just dropping by the Soup to see if "Your Beauty" was here? Smile, and I see that "You Are;" what a joy....Its getting late where "You" are I know, so, please allow myself to wish "'You,' 'Beautiful Dreams' Tonight Dear, 'With Love Always,'" John! ~

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 3:57:00 PM
    enjoyed reasing today, hope you are well.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 3:55:00 PM
    Great descriptiveness in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 3:49:00 PM
    Got to learn my 5-7-5, hello, there Celene, having a nice one, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.d.