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QUIETUS POETRY CONTEST

Blog Posted:1/27/2022 7:20:00 PM

It seems the form is not clearly understood by some poets, so I'll elaborate again:

First the rules, as already stated in the contest description-

First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab + 

Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc +

Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain (any length as of poet’s choice) beginning with the first word (or words) of the first line, as the last line of the poem

The refrain (last line of poem) is also the poem title

This seems clear enough. However, I find that the most common error is mismatch of poem title, refrain and last line, which are to be identical. This may possibly owing to the reason that thought flow shifts, while the poem is being composed. What I usually do is, is to first think of a 'message'. That becomes the poem title. Then I write it as the refrain as well as last line (copy-paste), so there is no mistake later on. Thereafter, I try to compose the penultimate line of equal syllable count and also rhyming. After that I attempt to harmonise the rest of the poem, with the theme. 

It's an easy form of just 9 lines, which I use often. With short attention spans, there's a large section of readers who don't have the patience to read long poems! For those who think they can, let's have a show of hands of who all have read Sri Aurobindo's epic, Savitri?



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Date: 1/29/2022 9:29:00 PM
I remember I got confused first time I did it, but as long as I see an example, now I am able to get it. good luck in getting good entries.
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Date: 1/29/2022 10:26:00 PM
There are hundreds of Quietus poems … here’s an illustration of one I wrote today https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/blissful_torus_1426446
Date: 1/28/2022 3:37:00 PM
Seeker, thanks for the reminder, I needed it for sure, but got it now (hopefully) love the challenge and your invented form Quietus is quite wonderful ~
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Date: 1/28/2022 6:31:00 PM
I’ll believe you when you employ this form routinely; not merely for contests! :)

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5/12/2024 Say it like it is Free versejoy,spiritual,
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5/11/2024 Thought of the day Coupletintrospection,
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5/10/2024 Monk mode Ethereejoy,love,spiritual,
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5/10/2024 Thought of the day Juejugod,joy,love,
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5/9/2024 Thought of the day Coupletangst,god,peace,
5/9/2024 Invoking grace Than-Baukjoy,love,
5/9/2024 choosing to suffer Than-Baukangst,desire,fear,hope,
5/9/2024 Show me God Sonnetgod,spiritual,truth,
5/8/2024 Zen mode Free versespiritual,
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5/7/2024 The vaporised self Quatrainjoy,spiritual,
5/7/2024 Idle musings Free verseintrospection,spiritual,
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5/5/2024 Thought of the day Coupletintrospection,
5/5/2024 Feeling not thinking Sestinaspiritual,
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With Eternal Sent Bliss Two Hearts Reborn - a Collaboration With Robert Lindley Rhymedesire,husband,longing,lo
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I Held Her To My Heart Quatraingranddaughter,grandmother
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Hypnotized Rhymeinspiration,love,
Joy and Kindness Free verseinspiration,
The Supreme Source Rhymespiritual,
Summer Lace Rhymebeauty,day,love,morning,n
Conversation With My Soul Versegiving,love,wisdom,
The Light and the Veil Sonnetfaith,god,light,
Praise of Peace Free verseappreciation,butterfly,fl
The Dissolving Heart Free versemuse,
This Withered Threshold Rhymeautumn,nature,
Amazing God Free verseappreciation,blessing,god
Life Has Been Divine Free verselife,
Whose Muse Elusive Dew Rhymedestiny,life,lost love,mo
But a Moment Free versedeath,imagery,nature,rela
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Hummingbird Walk Free versepoetry,
Aura of Her Magnificence Free verselove,poetry,romantic love
Into the Distance Otherpoetry,
Song of Stars Free versebeautiful,heaven,inspirat
A Marvelous Feeling Free versemusic,
My Stolen Garden Free verseflower,garden,
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I Remember Years Ago Potd Free versememory,
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A Sprinkle of Wit Rhymelight,poetry,truth,
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Wave of Fantasy Versedream,fantasy,
His Guiding Light - 2 Free verseinspirational,jesus,
Love In Pompeii Free versedeath,kiss,love,together,
Flight Free versebeauty,death,flying,freed
Waves Played a Symphony Rhymelight,morning,
Whispers Shared Free verseappreciation,beauty,commu
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Winter's Hue Haikusilence,snow,winter,
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Soothing Tomorrows Free verseemotions,love,
Yet Rhymeheartbreak,love,
Veiled Free versespiritual,
Porcelain Doll Rhymeage,allusion,girl,sad,
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