Swift, the Rills

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swift, swift, the rills do run
          swift, from high the mountain
               swifter, tho', the running years
     flowing through life's fountain

creep, creep, the brumal mists
          creep 'midst fells and highlands
               creeping 'round the peaks and years
     mem'ries drowned like islands

drift, drift, my dreams to sea
          drift, like thought and feather
               drifting toward a mortal bloom
     thick with highland heather

sleep, sleep, at last to dream
          sleep, bides blessed and meek
               sleep, come press a kiss goodbye...
     so sweet, now... 'pon my cheek.

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Date: 1/24/2022 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Gregory. Congratulations on your First Place! I tried to pick my favorite line, but they're all beautiful :)
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Date: 8/13/2021 7:01:00 PM
This is beautifully crafted. A marvelous piece. It drifts lightly through time and space, and the vocabulary is lovely.
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Date: 8/8/2021 4:56:00 AM
Another top-class and beautifully woven creation I missed reading my friend. Yes, this is without any doubt a true masterpiece in this old poet's judgement! I do so very fully agree with my friend Gina-- AMAZING! And a fav.. God bless...
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Date: 8/2/2021 9:14:00 PM
Wow! A delight to read! A mood elevator, congrats on your win, Greg. I’m marking this as a fave
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Date: 8/2/2021 7:01:00 PM
Real Rhyme with jinglings. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/22/2021 2:11:00 AM
A lovely rhyme, Greg:) great rhythm and flow:)
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Date: 7/19/2021 3:23:00 AM
WOW! I love this. You're an amazing poet! God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/21/2021 4:00:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Gina, this one is special to me - it is the sister poem to one I wrote a couple of years ago called "Soft, The Bells", that I believe came from a place without - the creative conscience, a higher power, whatever you wish to call it ... one of those that just flowed. It's really special when that happens! Blessings! <3
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