Vibrant aloneness

eyes clench shut 
bliss spasms manifest
all we do is receive
God does the rest

ours is is a lonely path
because although we share
in truth no one understands
words laying our soul bare
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Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Yes, at times it is hard to understand the other person's point of view or emotion. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Seeker Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Yes, bliss beat delight is like a secret hidden in plain sight.
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