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Graveyard, Forest, Forest Cemetery, Dig, Tombstones

the ornate gate is ... rusty and burnt orange & burgundy leaves are whirling- swirling- dancing- among the rows & rows of ... headstones the one I seek is waiting ... always waiting- for "the rose" I will leave ... _________________________ March 07, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/always waiting Copyright Protected, ID 03-1437-091-07 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Bite Size Poem, No. 39 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 03/15/2022 Submitted to the Premier contest, A Brian Strand 1090 sponsor, Brain Strand, Judged 03/17/2022 First Place

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 10:15:00 PM

Great waiting. Feeling expressed very powerfully. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2022 3:31:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/9/2022 11:11:00 PM

So, so moving, exquisitely written, a fave

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2022 2:14:00 PM

Seek, thank you so much for the compliment and the Fav, it means a lot to me ~Constance

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/8/2022 7:30:00 AM

Beauty, longing, transcendent, such fine poetry, my friend...

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2022 8:08:00 AM

Jim, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, friendship ~Constance

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/8/2022 2:12:00 AM

Very touching, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2022 8:09:00 AM

Subimal, thank you so much for visiting and the compliment ~Constance

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 3/7/2022 5:40:00 PM

Tender, heart wrenching image beautifully expressed, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2022 8:09:00 AM

Geoffrey, thank you so much for the compliment and the visit ~Constance

Bill Baker

Date: 3/7/2022 3:36:00 PM

Lovely, poetic presentation of a sobering moment. It's good to find something you can depend on, even if it's just something you sense from a repeated experience, Constance. I like this poem. I wish you well in the contest, Bill

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2022 8:10:00 AM

Bill, thank you so much for your comment, the compliment and encouragement ~Constance