The Sounds of Bliss

Your sigh is like the whisper of the wind.
How sweet its susurration in my ear.
I lie beneath your slender body pinned
with tenderness! You utter words sincere.

A river I’ve become because I feel
a flow of pleasure overtaking me
as all my inhibitions you now steal.
And like the brook nearby that I can see,
I’m feeling warm waves coursing through me too.
I murmur as I ripple with delight!
As sultrily you do those things you do,
we breathe more quickly, and our hearts take flight.

Low moans . . . the gasp! Was it yours or mine?
It matter not when bliss is this divine.

April 30, 2021
For the  Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, very sensual, well done, love _Constance
Seeker Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Wow! How did I miss reading this earlier? What an outstanding, love suffused blissful fusion of souls! Congrats on your win Andrea! You continue to surpass yourself! A fave for me :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Your romantic heart took this on a romantic journey Andrea. I loved it. Happy Mother’s Day my friend. Blessings xxoo
Babcock Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Wow you have this poem hot and spicy and full of romantic passion. Nice one Andrea. love phyl
Jayasankar Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Loved this sonnet Andrea.. Your sounds of bliss are blissful indeed... amazing romantic expressions... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
Krutsinger Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:47 PM
Beautiful poem, Andrea, as usual you have raised the bar
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:27 PM
Brilliant sonnet worthy of highest placement. No wonder you're our number on poet.
Richards Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 9:06 PM
I enjoyed reading this passionate sonnet, yet subtly expressed. Regards Suzete :))
Rose  Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Softly then a feather in the wind Andrea. A well delivered poem, I am sure she will love it, gl, :)
DiMino Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:49 PM
How wonderfully romantic. Love it!
Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Full of romance and passion Andrea. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Hankins Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful piece of writing, Andrea. I loved it. I see it placing high in Constance's contest.
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