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Eternal Life and the Total Self

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Life is but a fleeting whisper echoing through time, never dying, always being- magnificent and sublime. The body's a receptacle, a superficial shell, but in it dwells the gift of Soul; eternity knows it well. The Soul contains the truths of life, to all that's ever been; to all things now, and yet to come, but guards them deep within. The mind has hidden doors to Soul; we long to find the key, unleash the vision waiting there, that lives eternally. And so mind seeks to open wide, grasp firm the light of Soul. and at that moment when it does, we know we will be whole. So when we penetrate the shield that stands between these two, we will perceive with inner sight- our Soul, complete and new. If in this life, we cannot grasp this bond of Soul and mind, we'll be reborn to live again, till total self we find. We've been before, so many times; we've known many a past. We'll be again- an echo in time, till mind and Soul are fast. And when that final day does come, at last to lift our Soul, for Him to gather in His arms- our perfect self- now whole. May 19, 2016 ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Imagine A Freedom Beyond Imagination Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose Judged: 02/25/2021 Some religions, like Hinduism, believe in reincarnation which refines the soul by it living many lifetimes, and after it is perfected, goes back to God. My poem is based on that belief. So many people, including myself, have inner feelings or momentary flashbacks like they have lived before in another life.

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Timothy Ray

Date: 4/8/2022 2:01:00 PM

there is an Italian saying, with that first breath we begin our journey into eternity...and you have aptly explained what they speak of...vivid lines, great poem

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/13/2021 4:05:00 AM

Awesome! A fave

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and for the fave! Much appreciated! Sandra

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/10/2021 9:54:00 AM

Hi Sandra, Your 1st place win is so deserved! The first line grabbed me and I was hooked .....Fabulous! Take Care, Paulette

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paulette! Sandra

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/6/2021 3:35:00 PM

Returning to your poem to fully grasp the insights expressed in your poem. I am aware of the philosophy and belief you have described - you have beautifully expressed it in your poem. Congratulations again on your top win ~ Mala

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:53:00 PM

Thank you very much, Malabika! Sandra

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/26/2021 3:10:00 PM

Congratulations! Profound sublime thoughts.

L. J. Carber

Date: 2/26/2021 11:14:00 AM

Like you, Sandra, I have come to believe in reincarnation-- partly based on 'weird' experiences, like the 'death throes' I felt when I visited the Gettysburg battlefield at 17 [hence the poem 'Gettysburg Redux']--congrats on yr 1st place!

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:53:00 PM

So pleased that you can identify with my poem! Thank you! Sandra

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/26/2021 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Life has many questions without any answers. Have a blessed day..............

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:54:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula! Sandra

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/26/2021 6:13:00 AM

This is stunning Sandra. A very insightful look at our search for moksha. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Carol Mitra

Date: 2/26/2021 12:52:00 AM

Amazing Souled Out on this beautiful poem Sandra....Congrats on your first place win dear...much love :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carol! Sandra

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/25/2021 3:47:00 PM

Life is but a fleeting whisper Sandra , but you have immortalized it with your exceptional talent. Thank you for joining, and congrats on your 1st place win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2021 5:55:00 PM

Thanks so much for your contest and my nice placement! Sandra

Peter Walsh

Date: 11/19/2020 4:24:00 AM

very profound sandra . . . love it!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/19/2020 1:39:00 AM

excellent poem penned; it's really thought provoking expression

Franci Hoffman

Date: 11/18/2020 10:58:00 AM

A beautiful and encouraging look at existence. Superbly penned, Sandra!

Muhamad Hilmi Saifuddin

Date: 11/16/2020 10:48:00 PM

A great write discussing the notion of soul, body, religion and its connection. :) Life is truly a mystery yet to be solved.

Thomas Wells

Date: 11/16/2020 4:06:00 PM

I have studied eastern philosophy and have been struck by the similarities between the Hindu notion of reincarnation and soul with those of Plato. Plato claimed that there is a realm of perfect forms and essence out of which the soul descends into mortal changing form. At death, the soul returns to this realm and then it reemerges again in mortal form when someone is born. I loved this aphoristic poem! Thank you.

Joe Kidd

Date: 11/16/2020 2:06:00 PM

This work shows a clarity. A deep understanding of what is. You are on a good path. Peace to you.

L. J. Carber

Date: 11/16/2020 11:19:00 AM

I share in your awareness, Sandra--I learned the reality of my own soul 50 years ago when I had an NDE whilst almost drowning. And I also suspect re-incarnation is real, based partly on my own experience [as I allude to in my poem, 'Gettysburg Redux'] and what others have told me of their own past life 'sensations'.

Camp Cab

Date: 11/16/2020 10:55:00 AM

Beautiful and well put.

Dexter Greener

Date: 11/16/2020 9:39:00 AM

Well Done Sandra I really enjoyed this

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/30/2019 1:47:00 PM

Hello Sandra Haight, I agree with you. I believe in the reincarnation. I believe we have a soul. I believe with every word in this poem. have a nice dy my fiend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/31/2019 12:42:00 PM

Hello Sandra Height, Happy New Year to you and family. Have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2019 6:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Darlene, for stopping by to read my poem and express your supportive comments. I so much appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/25/2019 6:13:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win, Sandra.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 7:02:00 PM

I am so happy to find that you can acknowledge this philosophy. I have wondered and wondered about it and I think it is very possible this is true. Congrats on the win.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 5/24/2019 5:01:00 PM

Moving and very well written. Makes you think and that is art. Congratulations. Yes, I have the moments also.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/24/2019 6:52:00 AM

My heartfelt thanks with no end, for your participation Sandra, CHEERS indeed for your placement in the Epic Ethereal Editor Contest, Aloha William Kekaula

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/21/2019 3:25:00 PM

hello Sandra Haight, you have created a beautiful poem. It sounds like a prayer. Have a nice day my friend.