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Premiere Contest WinnerEternal Life and the Total Self

Life is but a fleeting whisper echoing through time, never dying, always being- magnificent and sublime. The body's a receptacle, a superficial shell, but in it dwells the gift of Soul; eternity knows it well. The Soul contains the truths of life, to all that's ever been; to all things now, and yet to come, but guards them deep within. The mind has hidden doors to Soul; we long to find the key, unleash the vision waiting there, that lives eternally. And so mind seeks to open wide, grasp firm the light of Soul. and at that moment when it does, we know we will be whole. So when we penetrate the shield that stands between these two, we will perceive with inner sight- our Soul, complete and new. If in this life, we cannot grasp this bond of Soul and mind, we'll be reborn to live again, till total self we find. We've been before, so many times; we've known many a past. We'll be again- an echo in time, till mind and Soul are fast. And when that final day does come, at last to lift our Soul, for Him to gather in His arms- our perfect self- now whole. May 19, 2016 ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Imagine A Freedom Beyond Imagination Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose Judged: 02/25/2021
Some religions, like Hinduism, believe in reincarnation which refines the soul by it living many lifetimes, and after it is perfected, goes back to God. My poem is based on that belief. So many people, including myself, have inner feelings or momentary flashbacks like they have lived before in another life.
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Ray Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 2:01 PM
there is an Italian saying, with that first breath we begin our journey into eternity...and you have aptly explained what they speak of...vivid lines, great poem
Seeker Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 4:05 AM
Awesome! A fave
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and for the fave! Much appreciated! Sandra
Calasibetta Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Hi Sandra, Your 1st place win is so deserved! The first line grabbed me and I was hooked .....Fabulous! Take Care, Paulette
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thank you so much, Paulette! Sandra
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Returning to your poem to fully grasp the insights expressed in your poem. I am aware of the philosophy and belief you have described - you have beautifully expressed it in your poem. Congratulations again on your top win ~ Mala
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:53 PM
Thank you very much, Malabika! Sandra
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations! Profound sublime thoughts.
Carber Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 11:14 AM
Like you, Sandra, I have come to believe in reincarnation-- partly based on 'weird' experiences, like the 'death throes' I felt when I visited the Gettysburg battlefield at 17 [hence the poem 'Gettysburg Redux']--congrats on yr 1st place!
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:53 PM
So pleased that you can identify with my poem! Thank you! Sandra
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Life has many questions without any answers. Have a blessed day..............
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Thank you very much, Paula! Sandra
Fowler Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 6:13 AM
This is stunning Sandra. A very insightful look at our search for moksha. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Mitra Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 12:52 AM
Amazing Souled Out on this beautiful poem Sandra....Congrats on your first place win dear...much love :)
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Thank you so much, Carol! Sandra
Rose  Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Life is but a fleeting whisper Sandra , but you have immortalized it with your exceptional talent. Thank you for joining, and congrats on your 1st place win.
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:55 PM
Thanks so much for your contest and my nice placement! Sandra
Walsh Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 4:24 AM
very profound sandra . . . love it!
Bangalee Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 1:39 AM
excellent poem penned; it's really thought provoking expression
Hoffman Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 10:58 AM
A beautiful and encouraging look at existence. Superbly penned, Sandra!
Saifuddin  Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 10:48 PM
A great write discussing the notion of soul, body, religion and its connection. :) Life is truly a mystery yet to be solved.
Wells Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 4:06 PM
I have studied eastern philosophy and have been struck by the similarities between the Hindu notion of reincarnation and soul with those of Plato. Plato claimed that there is a realm of perfect forms and essence out of which the soul descends into mortal changing form. At death, the soul returns to this realm and then it reemerges again in mortal form when someone is born. I loved this aphoristic poem! Thank you.
Kidd Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:06 PM
This work shows a clarity. A deep understanding of what is. You are on a good path. Peace to you.
Carber Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 11:19 AM
I share in your awareness, Sandra--I learned the reality of my own soul 50 years ago when I had an NDE whilst almost drowning. And I also suspect re-incarnation is real, based partly on my own experience [as I allude to in my poem, 'Gettysburg Redux'] and what others have told me of their own past life 'sensations'.
Cab Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Beautiful and well put.
Greener Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Well Done Sandra I really enjoyed this
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Hello Sandra Haight, I agree with you. I believe in the reincarnation. I believe we have a soul. I believe with every word in this poem. have a nice dy my fiend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Hello Sandra Height, Happy New Year to you and family. Have a nice day my friend.
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for stopping by to read my poem and express your supportive comments. I so much appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Sandra.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:02 PM
I am so happy to find that you can acknowledge this philosophy. I have wondered and wondered about it and I think it is very possible this is true. Congrats on the win.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Moving and very well written. Makes you think and that is art. Congratulations. Yes, I have the moments also.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 6:52 AM
My heartfelt thanks with no end, for your participation Sandra, CHEERS indeed for your placement in the Epic Ethereal Editor Contest, Aloha William Kekaula
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 3:25 PM
hello Sandra Haight, you have created a beautiful poem. It sounds like a prayer. Have a nice day my friend.
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