Premiere Contest WinnerA Magical Time

Ebony shadows pool in the darkness of night. And behind crimson clouds, a spent sun slips from sight. A cauldron of black bats eclipses a gold moon. While traversing a sky of sable and maroon. Dusk buffs, green canopies to a shadowy sheen. And consolations form, where only time has been. Shrouded in ghostly mist, deprived of light, plants weep. And their tears morph into drops of dew as we sleep. Night's a magical time that is dear to my heart. And meant to be savored; like aged wine or fine art.
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Hamilton Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 6:04 AM
TRUELY BEAUTIFUL Emile ty for this lovely poem and on placing in my contest hugs Shadow
Pinet Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Thanks, Shadow; I welcome the placement and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Meadows Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 12:19 AM
A lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Well written.
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Jeanette; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Bowring Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 7:57 AM
What a beautiful poem Emile.Wonderful use of poetic words.Love the line,’ Trees display canopies in shifting shades of green’. Enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing.
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Christina; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Baker Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Congrats on your Trophy win, Emile. A fine poem on the magic of night. Have a great week! Bill
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Thanks, Bill; I welcome and appreciate your comments; you brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Kulkarni Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Sweet poem! Enjoyed reading it!
Pinet Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Thanks, Smita; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Ward Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 9:34 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM!
Pinet Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Daisy; I appreciate it, my friend; Emile.
Seeker Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Brilliant! A clear fav, Emile ~ warmest congratulations on your trophy win
Pinet Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Thanks, Unseeking; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Drowley Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your win1 Excellent imagery.
Pinet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Thanks, David; I appreciate it, my friend; Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Emile, your word pairings and images simply jump off of the page with a vibrant life of their own! Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings my friend.
Pinet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, it's always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:47 AM
Exceptional poetry, Emile, congratulations:)
Pinet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Joanna; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Roger  Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:25 AM
Beautiful...
Pinet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Roger; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Hello Emile, Your poem brings out the magical night. I love the way you describe the night. My friend. Enjoy your day./Darlene\
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June 11, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Hello Emile, It is so nice to see you here. My friend you are welcome. Enjoy your evening . / Darlene\
Pinet Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Thanks, Darlene; it's always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend, Emile.
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