Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

I Am But a Grain of Sand

"Happiness and sorrow ebb and flow like waves upon a beach, 
and I am but a grain of sand."
                                        by poet


I think of myself as nothing more than a sunflower
who, at the hint of first light, turns to face due East
Respectful of dawn, through God's glorious power,
morning stirs my spiritual need, and upon it I feast.

It's not a shortcoming to be generous and humble,
nor a weakness in my character, a burden to bear.
I'm never too proud to ask for help when I stumble
for if I humbly ask for His hand, it will be there.

Defiantly, pride seems to take control before a fall
Arrogance is a foolish trait that becomes a liability
ending in dishonor when the foolhardy hit a wall.
Humility can be a saving grace; but not a disability.

I am just a tiny grain of sand, washed upon a beach,
a speck of dust on Earth, the size of a mustard seed.
I believe by being modest, happiness is in my reach
Content with what little I have, not tempted by greed.

Integrity is an admirable quality in an altruistic mind
Benevolence and compassion are gifts to be lauded
By living an unassuming life, my worth will be defined
without need to be rewarded, praised, or applauded.



November 3, 2021
Your Own Philosophy Statement Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Dustin Petersen January 3, 2024 at 3:37 PM This is a very moving work of art. You commented on some of my poems, so I thought I would read some of yours. Now I feel honored that a poet of your skill liked some I wrote. I hope to one day attain a fraction of your ability. Truely amazing! Jenna Logan January 5, 2024 at 5:03 AM Dustin, your comments and compliments are very kind and I appreciate them.

John Hamilton November 28, 2021 at 1:32 PM What a wonderful spiritual write Jenna, I concur with the totality of the write, it must have placed well, for me it's a winner! Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 3:15 AM Hello, John. If you agree with my thoughts on this one, I am very pleased to have written it. It placed third. Thank you for such kind comments.

Andy Chunn November 22, 2021 at 8:00 PM Truly a worthy philosophy statement that all should strive toward. We all could use this lesson quite often. Jenna Logan November 24, 2021 at 5:08 AM I'm pleased by your remarks, Andy. Thank you.

Bryan Norton November 20, 2021 at 2:28 PM I like the line, that by being modest, happiness is within your reach. Caters to the spirituality in each of us. Excellent write. Thank you, Bryan Jenna Logan November 24, 2021 at 5:08 AM Thank you ever so much, Bryan.

Sarah Hall November 19, 2021 at 3:09 PM Beautifully written. Inspired to my heart. Nicely put together. Thank You for a well done write. Jenna Logan November 24, 2021 at 5:08 AM I am truly delighted with your response, Sarah. Thanks so much.

John Watt November 16, 2021 at 5:05 PM I forgot to mention congrats for topping the best new poems list too. Apparently your writing has resonated with many! Jenna Logan November 16, 2021 at 5:22 PM Oh thank you for that information. I really appreciate you for telling me. I forget to look at that, but knowing it's been appreciated by so many poets is encouraging.

John Watt November 16, 2021 at 3:38 PM Jenna, I am in agreement with you that humility is an honorable virtue to pursue. I commend you for unpacking so many attributes of humility in this poem: modesty, contentment, integrity, compassion, avoiding pride and arrogance, trusting in God, living an unassuming life. Your last line sums it up I think, 'without need to be rewarded, praised, or applauded.' I admire the care you put into this expression of your philosophy, down to the rhythm and rhymes. Really like the C.S. Lewis quote, too. Congrats for your high placement in the contest... definitely a fave for me ~ John Jenna Logan November 16, 2021 at 5:21 PM What a wonderful critique you've left for my prayer of thanksgiving, John. I am gratified by your thoughts and the remarks made by many others, that it's to God that we owe everything. Thank you so much.

Thomas Love November 16, 2021 at 7:20 AM I like the mention of mustard seeds. Jenna Logan November 16, 2021 at 7:28 AM Thanks, Thomas.

Joe Maverick November 13, 2021 at 11:17 AM I can't find a thing wrong with this gem Jenna It's a good message, in the write I hope you Got a high place or win..' p s let me Know. When you get the time! Jenna Logan November 13, 2021 at 11:19 AM Thank you for your interest, Joe. It was placed third.

Unseeking Seeker November 12, 2021 at 11:30 PM How’d I miss this one? A fave! Jenna Logan November 13, 2021 at 1:31 AM You didn't miss it after all, and I truly appreciate the fave. Thanks, Seeker.

Valsa George November 12, 2021 at 5:28 AM I have fallen in love with the sentiments you have so beautifully expressed here. This is exactly how I too feel and it is the credo of my life..... to live humble and contented. Each one is gifted in his/her own way. There is no need to be haughty, arrogant or proud. We are just a speck in this universe. Jenna Logan November 12, 2021 at 5:18 PM Thank you for such detailed and encouraging comments. They’re appreciated.

Beata Agustin November 9, 2021 at 4:28 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your philosophy statement, expounded wisely through your awesome poetic style. God bless you. Jenna Logan November 9, 2021 at 9:05 AM Thanks so much for your remarks, Beata.

Gershon Wolf November 7, 2021 at 8:10 PM Yes, indeed, we are but 'specks' in the vastness of the cosmos -- and yet, what we do, our every action, has an impact on the heavens... Masterfully composed, Jenna. Sweetness and Light, Gershon Jenna Logan November 9, 2021 at 9:05 AM Thank you for such detailed thoughts, Gershon.

Sam Kauffman November 5, 2021 at 11:03 AM But what a lovely "grain of sand" Jenna generously sharing of your gifts and giftedness and giving thanks to the Master - the Creator of that grain of sand - in the work of your hands. As Eve says, God revels in the beauty of each grain of sand. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings from the beach! Jenna Logan November 6, 2021 at 8:30 AM Thanks a whole bunch, Sam. I appreciate your remarks.

Eve Roper November 4, 2021 at 2:20 PM The Lord is our Master, from above everyone might look like a speck of sand from up above, but to Him his view as a parent admiring our beauty. Congratulations on your win, Jenna, great write. Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 4:37 PM He is our loving Father. Thank you, Eve.

Gordon Mcconnell November 4, 2021 at 2:10 PM Superb pen Jenna, this is really challenging piece but so filled with hope as well. I must make this a fav, one that needs read over and over again till its one's daily practice. Blessings always, Gordon Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 4:35 PM I’m honored that you have faved this one to read again. Thank you very much, Gordon.

Robert James Liguori November 4, 2021 at 10:24 AM We are all but grains of sand. Congratulations on your placement of such blessed words. Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar November 4, 2021 at 2:33 AM Great advice. Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM Thank you, Victor.

Bill Baker November 3, 2021 at 2:16 PM Beautiful presentation Jenna, and a beautiful philosophy to live by. Excellent rhyming and the lines flowed smoothly from start to finish. I enjoyed your poem very much. Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM I love your critique, Bill. Thank you ever so much.

David Kavanagh November 3, 2021 at 10:29 AM Admiral qualities to possess Jenna, you set the bar pretty high, we all have our strongpoints and weaknesses, no two grains of sand are indeed the same, I agree with Tom, would look great framed on a wall, for all to ponder every once in a while, wonderful poetry and message, cheers David Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 12:29 PM I'm delighted that you and Tom both think this is worthy of being framed. That's the best kind of recognition. Thanks, David.

L Milton Hankins November 3, 2021 at 9:05 AM Jenna, this is truly a beautiful piece of writing on the value and reward of living a life of integrity and honest, devoid of arrogance and pride. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and, hopefully, I can apply its principles to my own life. a FAVE. Thanks for sharing this jewel! Jenna Logan November 4, 2021 at 12:28 PM Thank you for admiring these lines, Milt. I think I enjoyed writing them as much as you seem to have in reading them. I'm grateful for your kind remarks.

Tom Cunningham November 3, 2021 at 8:25 AM A great philosophy to live by Jenna, a perfect entry for the contest. It wouldn't look out of place in a frame on the wall. Tom Jenna Logan November 3, 2021 at 8:41 AM Sweet sentiments, Tom. I'm always grateful to read your thoughts. Thank you.