Teasing Kiss

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Water they have kicked into the air on the sidewalk; drowning scent of welcome rain, while they talk. Hopscotch, doodle shapes chalk marks dissolving, impulse, a test of youth, on one foot jumping. Tease of laughter neath wet red umbrella… Soft lips rile sunshine with the taste of vanilla. Warmth flutter in response with no more talk. 8/9/2021 'Your Favorite Rhyme Poem in August 2021' Contest Info Sponsor Constance La France

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2021 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 9/3/2021 8:53:00 AM

Very smooth ! Congratulations on your win :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/2/2021 8:43:00 PM

Wow! How endearingly romantic, bubbling with love and vitality! Congrats on your win, a fave for me!

Constance La France

Date: 9/2/2021 3:19:00 PM

Eve, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest, I really like your image ~ love and serenity ,_ Constance

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2021 3:17:00 PM

You have painted a delightful scene with your poem, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/11/2021 1:23:00 PM

'Tease of laughter neath wed red umbrella', youth, we have all been there, but who says we are old! I adore this poem, Awesome write Eve. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.