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Teasing Kiss

Water they have kicked into the air on the sidewalk; 
drowning scent of welcome rain, while they talk. 
Hopscotch, doodle shapes chalk marks dissolving,
impulse, a test of youth, on one foot jumping. 
Tease of laughter neath wet red umbrella… 
Soft lips rile sunshine with the taste of vanilla. 
Warmth flutter in response with no more talk.


8/9/2021

'Your Favorite Rhyme Poem in August 2021' Contest Info
Sponsor	Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
Boreham Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Very smooth ! Congratulations on your win :)
Seeker Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Wow! How endearingly romantic, bubbling with love and vitality! Congrats on your win, a fave for me!
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Eve, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest, I really like your image ~ love and serenity ,_ Constance
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 3:17 PM
You have painted a delightful scene with your poem, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Proxenos Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 1:23 PM
'Tease of laughter neath wed red umbrella', youth, we have all been there, but who says we are old! I adore this poem, Awesome write Eve. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Theraven Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Eve, The color red was done a kindness here. Such warmth for an umbrella couple you found. -Richard
Rose  Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:23 PM
Amazing what can transpire underneath an umbrella (smile ) beautifully depicted Eve, your poetry flourishes in my heart, as always. :)
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:02 AM
- A lovely picture with romance under the umbrella, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Now why I prefer the taste of chocolate? Hugs
Daniel Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 2:03 AM
You describe the painting so wonderfully, Eve, great imagery:)
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