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Wave of Fantasy

How earnestly, dear, you enchant my dream Blooming heart’s wishes in amorous theme Lifting me to your realm of astral mysteries Buoying my longings on wings of your spirits Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss, Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas. Traversing through empire of eternal revelry, Dazzling me with allure of inflamed intimacy You lured me to magical palace of fantasy, Way beyond kingdom of nebulae, galaxies, Through reign of Venus~ the goddess of beauty, And mythical territory of monarchy moonlit. Mesmerizing dawn, scripting tale of romance, You touched my soul, conquering my heart, As purple tints engraved arc of ebullient morn Honoring love, when hastily you were gone, Leaving behind memories, wallowing in awe, Of your passion esoteric, blazing on and on. February 11, 2023 Placed 7th: Wave of Fantasy Premium Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/22/2023 9:48:00 AM

Romantic and superbly written, with incredible imagery. Belated congratulations on your win, Vijay.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/3/2023 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Dear Vijay, and also on your poem being on top of the 100 poems list. Your poem is rich in romantic imagery, and magical descriptive verse. Hope your exquisite imagination and flowing golden pen keep creating such gems. Wave of fantasy indeed!Best wishes ~ Mala

Robertina B.

Date: 3/21/2023 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay!! Such a stunning verse, my friend.. I was completely mesmerized by the beauty of your verse! Many blessings!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/16/2023 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, your poem is number one on the best new poems list. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2023 5:45:00 AM

Many thanks for your return visit my friend. Always a joy when you visit, Brandy.

Ann Peck

Date: 3/16/2023 4:06:00 PM

Beautiful!"surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas..."

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2023 5:44:00 AM

Thank you Ann.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/12/2023 1:14:00 AM

Beautiful. Waves of Beauty. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2023 5:44:00 AM

Thank you Gina.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/3/2023 5:40:00 PM

You took me away on a dream of your words, thoughts and emotions dear Vijay . Magical descriptions reside in my soul after reading this gem of yours ! I have been away awhile . So happy to be back and read your eloquence. Belated congratulations on your win . Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:40:00 PM

Glad to see you again, Susan. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Andrew John

Date: 3/1/2023 1:43:00 AM

I love the image of astral mysteries. Thank you, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:39:00 PM

So very kind of you Andrew--much appreciate.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/23/2023 6:04:00 PM

What a beautiful poem. Congratulations

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/22/2023 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Vijay!! Take care.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:38:00 PM

Many thanks for your return visit, Heidi. Much appreciate, as always.

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/22/2023 5:33:00 PM

A very beautiful poem, loved it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:38:00 PM

Thank you Aysha--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/22/2023 9:28:00 AM

Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss, Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas. We hang onto your romantic imagery, dear poet!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:37:00 PM

So nice to hear that, Kim. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2023 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/22/2023 3:33:00 AM

"realm of astral mysteries", "empire of eternal revelry", " inflamed intimacy" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:36:00 PM

Many thanks Christuraj--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/20/2023 12:33:00 AM

With borrowed breath i read this gem, Vijay, a worthy winner in the contest,.... Harry

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2023 2:49:00 PM

Sending my prayers your way, Harry, for your continued recovery. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciate, my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/18/2023 8:06:00 AM

Dearest Vijay, I just love when dreams and love are entwined and come to life so passionately as they have upon your enchanted poetic page. Your rich, textured verse brings me to realms of romance on an exquisite wave of fantasy with lush imagery and plush metaphors "Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss, Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas." Every verse is breathtaking, my friend! The ardent beauty of this piece is pure magic for my heart's imagination. A fav! Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2023 3:11:00 PM

So nice to hear that from you my friend. The elegance of your comments adorns this space. Honored to receive your FAVE and delighted by your kind feedback, Susan. Many thanks for spending the time to write detailed comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/17/2023 7:06:00 AM

You have indeed created a magnificent wave of fantasy, Vijay! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/16/2023 9:07:00 PM

Oh my, my! An easy fav ~congrats on your win, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thrilled by your visit and honored by your FAVE, US. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Michael Tor

Date: 2/16/2023 2:50:00 PM

Such adoring feelings in your words Vijay conveying much appreciation for the other in so many ways including galaxies, winds, in a splendid fantasy to be filled with. Your magical words always deliver a a state of mind that brings out inner emotions in the reader. You are the Master of Words my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2023 5:15:00 AM

So nice to hear that my friend. Your kind words always serve as inspiration for me. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting Michael. Many thanks. Stay safe and healthy.

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/16/2023 10:24:00 AM

Your dancing scripts truly mesmerized the dawn, cheers to being on Vie's list. I chose not to participate as the contest failed to indulge my senses--glad that my stalemate extended to your successful checkmate. Also, your comments on my blog are greatly appreciated, Vijay. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2023 5:13:00 AM

Glad to hear from you again my friend. Hope things are working out as you planned-stay safe with your family! Much appreciate your kind remarks, William. Many thanks.