Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Wave of Fantasy

How earnestly, dear, you enchant my dream
Blooming heart’s wishes in amorous theme
Lifting me to your realm of astral mysteries
Buoying my longings on wings of your spirits
Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss,
Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas.

Traversing through empire of eternal revelry,
Dazzling me with allure of inflamed intimacy
You lured me to magical palace of fantasy,
Way beyond kingdom of nebulae, galaxies,
Through reign of Venus~ the goddess of beauty,
And mythical territory of monarchy moonlit.

Mesmerizing dawn, scripting tale of romance,
You touched my soul, conquering my heart,
As purple tints engraved arc of ebullient morn
Honoring love, when hastily you were gone,
Leaving behind memories, wallowing in awe,
Of your passion esoteric, blazing on and on.

February 11, 2023
Placed 7th: Wave of Fantasy Premium Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Evelyn Judy Buehler June 22, 2023 at 9:48 AM Romantic and superbly written, with incredible imagery. Belated congratulations on your win, Vijay.

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 3, 2023 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on your win, Dear Vijay, and also on your poem being on top of the 100 poems list. Your poem is rich in romantic imagery, and magical descriptive verse. Hope your exquisite imagination and flowing golden pen keep creating such gems. Wave of fantasy indeed!Best wishes ~ Mala

Robertina B. March 21, 2023 at 5:54 PM Congratulations Vijay!! Such a stunning verse, my friend.. I was completely mesmerized by the beauty of your verse! Many blessings!

Brandy Nicole March 16, 2023 at 4:58 PM Congratulations Vijay, your poem is number one on the best new poems list. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit March 17, 2023 at 5:45 AM Many thanks for your return visit my friend. Always a joy when you visit, Brandy.

Ann Peck March 16, 2023 at 4:06 PM Beautiful!"surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas..." Vijay Pandit March 17, 2023 at 5:44 AM Thank you Ann.

Regina Mcintosh March 12, 2023 at 1:14 AM Beautiful. Waves of Beauty. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina Vijay Pandit March 17, 2023 at 5:44 AM Thank you Gina.

Susan Lawrence March 3, 2023 at 5:40 PM You took me away on a dream of your words, thoughts and emotions dear Vijay . Magical descriptions reside in my soul after reading this gem of yours ! I have been away awhile . So happy to be back and read your eloquence. Belated congratulations on your win . Susan :) Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:40 PM Glad to see you again, Susan. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Andrew John March 1, 2023 at 1:43 AM I love the image of astral mysteries. Thank you, Vijay. Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:39 PM So very kind of you Andrew--much appreciate.

Pashang Salehi February 23, 2023 at 6:04 PM What a beautiful poem. Congratulations Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:39 PM Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands February 22, 2023 at 7:43 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay!! Take care. Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:38 PM Many thanks for your return visit, Heidi. Much appreciate, as always.

Aysha Nuwas February 22, 2023 at 5:33 PM A very beautiful poem, loved it. Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:38 PM Thank you Aysha--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues February 22, 2023 at 9:28 AM Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss, Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas. We hang onto your romantic imagery, dear poet! Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:37 PM So nice to hear that, Kim. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sara Kendrick February 22, 2023 at 7:44 AM Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:37 PM Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex February 22, 2023 at 3:33 AM "realm of astral mysteries", "empire of eternal revelry", " inflamed intimacy" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit March 4, 2023 at 12:36 PM Many thanks Christuraj--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman February 20, 2023 at 12:33 AM With borrowed breath i read this gem, Vijay, a worthy winner in the contest,.... Harry Vijay Pandit February 20, 2023 at 2:49 PM Sending my prayers your way, Harry, for your continued recovery. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciate, my friend.

Susan Ashley February 18, 2023 at 8:06 AM Dearest Vijay, I just love when dreams and love are entwined and come to life so passionately as they have upon your enchanted poetic page. Your rich, textured verse brings me to realms of romance on an exquisite wave of fantasy with lush imagery and plush metaphors "Rowing leisurely to paradise of ethereal bliss, Surfing azure winds, navigating stellar seas." Every verse is breathtaking, my friend! The ardent beauty of this piece is pure magic for my heart's imagination. A fav! Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit February 18, 2023 at 3:11 PM So nice to hear that from you my friend. The elegance of your comments adorns this space. Honored to receive your FAVE and delighted by your kind feedback, Susan. Many thanks for spending the time to write detailed comments.

Janice Canerdy February 17, 2023 at 7:06 AM You have indeed created a magnificent wave of fantasy, Vijay! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice Vijay Pandit February 17, 2023 at 1:44 PM Thank you Janice--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Unseeking Seeker February 16, 2023 at 9:07 PM Oh my, my! An easy fav ~congrats on your win, Vijay Vijay Pandit February 17, 2023 at 6:30 AM Thrilled by your visit and honored by your FAVE, US. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Michael Tor February 16, 2023 at 2:50 PM Such adoring feelings in your words Vijay conveying much appreciation for the other in so many ways including galaxies, winds, in a splendid fantasy to be filled with. Your magical words always deliver a a state of mind that brings out inner emotions in the reader. You are the Master of Words my friend... Vijay Pandit February 17, 2023 at 5:15 AM So nice to hear that my friend. Your kind words always serve as inspiration for me. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting Michael. Many thanks. Stay safe and healthy.

William Kelii Kekaula February 16, 2023 at 10:24 AM Your dancing scripts truly mesmerized the dawn, cheers to being on Vie's list. I chose not to participate as the contest failed to indulge my senses--glad that my stalemate extended to your successful checkmate. Also, your comments on my blog are greatly appreciated, Vijay. Aloha, William Vijay Pandit February 17, 2023 at 5:13 AM Glad to hear from you again my friend. Hope things are working out as you planned-stay safe with your family! Much appreciate your kind remarks, William. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan February 16, 2023 at 5:08 AM Wow!!! Just wow!!! Such a beautiful poetry... Soothing and rhythmical... Was dancing with your wave of fantasy while reading this... Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 7:45 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Valsa George February 15, 2023 at 9:07 PM Back to your lovely poem with congratulations on your win, dear Vijay ! Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 7:44 AM Many thanks for your return visit, Valsa. Much appreciate.

Quoth Theraven February 15, 2023 at 7:56 PM Vijay, Lovely verses traversing through a 'purple tinted morn'. -Richard Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 7:44 AM Glad to see you again my friend. Many thanks, Richard.

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2023 at 5:24 PM it is a winner I see. that is so awesome. Congrats to you. Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 7:43 AM Many thanks Andrea. Much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2023 at 2:03 PM Now that is a fantasy for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 7:43 AM Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

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