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Holding Back Tears


  There is a rain deluge in the cemetery today,
      as I open the intricate old gate;
    I am lost in a sea of gray,
        stones worn old and ornate;

        a maze of twisting trails,
      step-ruined from all the years; 
        stones with faded details,
  a deep sadness fills me and I hold back tears;

  death is an unwanted guest who comes unbidden,
         and toppled stones touch like friends;
     moss leaving names hidden,
            I am on a path that bends;

            and now I complete my quest,
      but fall to my knees weeping;
         for our stone is moss distressed,
   on all sides covered and with lichen creeping;

   o, sorrow and grief the old cemetery is in disrepair,
        I breathe in the smell of decay;       
     and notice moss is everywhere,
            out of place is my bright bouquet.

"I place my flowers and holding back tears turn away." 
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July 29, 2021


Poetry/Rhyme/Holding Back Tears
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1376-328-29
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Title and Theme chosen  -  Holding Back Tears

Written for the Standard contest, This or That, Vol. 5
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 08/19/2021

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/24/2021 1:59:00 PM
Hello Constance, Many Thanks again for your comment on my most recent poem collaborated poem with Liam McDaid. "Holding Back Tears" is a masterfully done rhyme. I can see and immediately sense why this rhyme has received such positive comments and reviews. Exceptional Work!! A "FAV" too in my book!! Best Always, Gary
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Constance La France
Date: 8/25/2021 10:30:00 AM
Gary, thank you for the compliment and comment and for the FAV, appreciate a lot, best always ~Constance
Date: 8/21/2021 12:45:00 AM
Poignant write, Constance, congratulations on your win with this sad beauty:)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2021 12:57:00 PM
Jo. thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 2:52:00 PM
Excellent penmanship, Constance, congrats .
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2021 12:57:00 PM
Mystic, thank you for the compliment and congrats ~ Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 8:55:00 AM
Absolutely outstanding, Constance! A fave! Congrats on your win, God bless
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2021 12:21:00 PM
Seeker, thank so much for the compliment and the congrats and the FAV, appreciate ~Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 7:57:00 AM
You use very scholarly enriching words that enhance the beauty of your poems. I adore this.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2021 12:21:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment and compliment ~ Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Constance. You really deserve it with your stunning poem. Blessings and peace forever
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2021 12:22:00 PM
Lasaad, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, peace ~Constance
Date: 8/20/2021 6:46:00 AM
A stunning write with it's-like-I'm-there imagery! Congratulations on your first place win in my contest, Constance:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2021 7:23:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my placement. And for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate so much ~Constance
Date: 7/30/2021 1:15:00 AM
beautiful in its sadness and I love the way you format the poem it's like a river of tears flowing, you are so creative Constance:-( hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2021 5:11:00 AM
Jan, thank you for the compliment and the comment, it means a lot to me, I worked on this poem almost all day to get it perfect ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/29/2021 8:51:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Constance. A deep feeling of sadness and pain. Good luck in Edward's contest. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2021 5:12:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for returning to my poem and for the compliment and the encouragement ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/29/2021 4:08:00 PM
This is beautiful (sad- but beautiful and beautifully presented) Love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2021 5:13:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment on my words and layout, that means a lot to me ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/29/2021 10:53:00 AM
Hello Constance, yes good luck on the contest. Hugs. , & Sernity Darlene
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Date: 7/30/2021 10:54:00 AM
Hello Constance, Thank you Constance. Friendship and harmony. Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 1:50:00 PM
Darlene, thanks, I will let you know when my poem is done ~ friendship and harmony _Constance
Date: 7/29/2021 9:18:00 AM
Good luck working on your poem :)
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Date: 7/29/2021 1:50:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting my poem in progress, will let you know when it is done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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