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Hummingbird Walk

A trackless wind scatters his mind leaves fly away where no leaves are. A hummingbird inside his chest drums, the evening is escaping down roads long plowed over with remorseless change. It never used to be like this; he had once been the bold pirate of his fate his ship sailed away one day only to return in flames. Sometimes you have to shrug, keep walking around a small municipal park until a parked car follows you home The city will swallow its many tongues then bury its hummingbird mind until the dawn retrieves a life once more.

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Date: 8/18/2022 3:52:00 PM
I love the idea of the hummingbird in the chest, then "bold pirate of his fate!" My imagination creates a whole story from your few lines. Elizabeth
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/18/2022 4:31:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, glad it worked so well for you and thanks for the warm review. Best EA
Date: 8/18/2022 1:23:00 AM
Wow! Absolutely brilliant ~ a fave for me
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/18/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thank you U.S. always appreciated.

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