Hummingbird Walk

A trackless wind scatters his mind
leaves fly away where no leaves are.

A hummingbird inside his chest drums,
the evening is escaping down roads
long plowed over with remorseless change.

It never used to be like this;
he had once been the bold pirate of his fate
his ship sailed away one day only to return in flames.

Sometimes you have to shrug,
keep walking around a small municipal park
until a parked car follows you home

The city will swallow its many tongues
then bury its hummingbird mind
until the dawn
retrieves a life once more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mccann Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 3:52 PM
I love the idea of the hummingbird in the chest, then "bold pirate of his fate!" My imagination creates a whole story from your few lines. Elizabeth
Ashford Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 4:31 PM
Hi Elizabeth, glad it worked so well for you and thanks for the warm review. Best EA
Seeker Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 1:23 AM
Wow! Absolutely brilliant ~ a fave for me
Ashford Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Thank you U.S. always appreciated.
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