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Awake oh hermit

We looked in our head and found nothing there, save wisps of smoky thoughts, heart manifest, so we dived into our heart, where we found light of awareness, that makes us aware, whence opting to enter trance, in mere jest, this choice unsound, found us with ego bound. The game of do or dare, became soul’s snare and earth life became a burdensome test, with dark desires continuing to hound but then we felt love, asking us to pair with all existence, that we may be blessed, whence baptised, ego is in bliss mists drowned. That that died never was, yet was the cause of our amnesia, which flame of truth thaws.

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Date: 4/26/2024 4:11:00 AM
It's a romantic poem hidden with philosophical ideas. Brilliant sonnet. Loved it.
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Date: 4/26/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Victor dear
Date: 4/25/2024 11:32:00 PM
"The game of do or dare, became soul’s snare and earth life became a burdensome test..." The poem, as a whole, is philosophical and theological.
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Date: 4/25/2024 11:35:00 PM
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