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This Withered Threshold


Oh-
feet of mine
that walk the meadows vast and green
where azure skies and clouds unfold
and a stream comes babbling on a long climb
and wind like violins whisper cold
as leaves twirl red, orange and gold
and in the swaying trees birds sing sublime
melodies serene
Oh-
this withered threshold
where time is lingering in a season in-between
where bees drink from a faded marigold
and there are so many lovely scenes to behold
Oh-
I turn weary footsteps to a shaded place
to find a hued space
quiet



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September 07, 2022


Poetry/Rhyme/this withered threshold
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1485-898-07
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France


Written for the Premiere contest,  A Brian Strand Premiere Choice
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 09/09/2022

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance. There is such serenity in your words as nature becomes a haven for you soothing your seeking heart with color, sights and sounds. Blessings on your journey my friend.
La France Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations ,compliment and comment, blessings ~
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:31 AM
Way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this winner and dropping by my page with congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the visit and congratulations _gratitude ~
Alex Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 9:33 PM
"like violins whisper", "bees drink from a faded marigold" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations _gratitude ~
Seeker Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Take us with you! A deep, soulful write, Constance, congrats on your win, a fave
La France Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats and the FAV _gratitude ~
Calasibetta Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful autumn vision. :)Paulette
La France Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment _gratitude~
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Beautifullly written! Very nice :)
La France Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 3:08 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the compliment, peace and tranquility ~
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