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I Held Her To My Heart

 
My grandma and a rose are the same, each is God's masterpiece but with a different name." _by Constance __________________ My grandma took this broken child, she held me to her heart; and through my weeping tears I smiled, when she called me sweetheart. Grandma was a storyteller, I would sit on her lap; often, she was a taleteller, and after I would clap. And she encouraged me to write, she gave me a journal; I wrote my sadness and my fright, things I kept internal. I recall my sweet attic room, on my grandparents farm; and with love I began to bloom, I recall her sweet charm. With her love I was given wings, as I grew we were close; with my grandma I shared all things, till age problems arose. In a nursing home she waited, I would go to see her; she told me her life was fated, soon her words were a blur. I was there the day she left me, and I held her to my heart; I am now a writer would be, because of that sweetheart. ______________________ August 29, 2021 Poetry/Quatrain/I Held Her To My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 08-1385-198-29 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The One Who Touched My Heart sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 09/14/2021 Third Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1063) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/01/2022 First Place
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Seeker Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 9:03 PM
A fave!
La France Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Seeker, the ultimate compliment, thank you so much ~ Constance
Alex Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 8:07 PM
Great memory of grandma. Sentiments beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, never be afraid to express your pain ~Constance
Holmes Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Constance - this is a beautiful poem about your grandma - I am so glad that she gave you wings. She must have been an amazing, loving and supportive woman- Congrats on your win David
La France Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:38 PM
David, thank you so much for the congrats and the nice comment, my grandma was an amazing lady ~ love and serenity _Constance
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September 15, 2021 at 1:04 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this tribute poem to your Grandma. I rejoice with you for having been blessed by the Lord with a treasure like her. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Beata, thank you for the compliment and congrats, you are very welcome on your win/wins ~love and serenity _Constance
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September 14, 2021 at 7:49 AM
So beautiful Constance, love the love between you and your grandma who gave her heart to yours. Congratulations on the win in Regina’s contest… Belle
La France Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Belle, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:49 AM
A beautiful poem on your Grandma. I like very specially the last four lines. You have a beautiful way of writing your pains. Your words flow fluently. Hereby, I would like to thank you for the opportunities you have been giving me to take part in your contest. I feel very bad about the ones I missed. I enjoy participating in them. Thank you very much.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:27 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for your wonderful comment and compliment about my contests, so happy you are enjoying them ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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September 14, 2021 at 4:40 AM
So beautiful... you never fail to impress me with your talent, sweet friend. Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Gina, thank you for the contest and the wonderful theme and my great placement. And for the compliment on the poem and my writing and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Scragg Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Awe this is a very beautiful tribute to your grandma. I love the clever rhymes "journal" and "internal" for instance. Pure genius! Very moving and very lovely.
La France Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Natasha, thank you for the compliment and comment on my poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
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August 29, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Hello constance, this is a beautiful poem. Love & Friendship Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Hello Constance, yes it will be nice. Love & serenity Darlene
La France Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Darlene, thanks for visiting, and for the compliment, I am just beginning it but I think it will be nice ~ love and serenity _Constance
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