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When my heart could no longer illuminate, I gazed towards horizons shrouded in blurry blackness, revealing the agony of my sorrows to the moon. Wondering if it would gift me a beloved that reflects within my heart like an effervescent lamp. One that would recognise my voice, leading me to my dream world. Suddenly a jewel from the sky descended like sunset. I followed its path of sparkling stardust upon malachite meadows, so I could have a glimpse of this unseen artistry. I will never forget the first time she called my name, nor the tingling sensations of an abundance of internal butterflies. There she was, an untouched treasure. Was she the one to endow me with pleasure? Her precious persona enticed my sullen demeanour, as it beamed like a billion streetlights, reminding me of an unfinished song, where the silence in between heartbeats was her name - the last lyric to an omitted chorus. Sapphire skies reappeared bringing back absent sunshine, Its radiant rays glowing upon her shadow. Her eyes dazzled like bronze gems. Her ruby red lips revealed a smile brighter than a million pearls. Her golden locks of hair glistened, gently blowing in the aura of her magnificence. I'll never forget the first time she cried, her diamond tears trickled upon my chest, like little stars glittering in her gloom, concluding our unwritten poem, memorised within the backstreets of our minds. I can still savour the taste in my mouth - She said her mascara was waterproof, yet it's engraved within my soul like an eternal tattoo. The Silent One 21 February 2022

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Date: 9/17/2023 9:26:00 AM
Absolutely a poem composed by a very talented and deep-thinking poet my good friend. Imagery is truly golden and so very fiercely deep. This light-years away from just a little scribble. This to me is definitely the work of a masterful poet. A true gem and a fav too. God bless you.
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Date: 3/25/2022 12:36:00 PM
Wow another one with fantastic imagery. I thought you had been away but I guess you posted this when I thought you were inactive
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Date: 3/21/2022 9:51:00 PM
"Her eyes dazzled like bronze gems. Her ruby red lips revealed a smile brighter than a million pearls". Simply amazing !
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:00:00 AM
Your poem is exquisite, powerful, passionate and creative. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2022 6:08:00 AM
Such beautiful words describing such a profound love. Yes! My poetic friend, I am well...Just very busy with other projects. So nice to hear from you.
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Date: 3/3/2022 8:15:00 AM
Making this scribble a fave!
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:16:00 PM
Far from a little scribble my friend. You've been sitting in your beloved garden of many colors. Gifting you with more inspiration for the love of life. You are so gifted. Blessings always
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Date: 3/2/2022 12:54:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Silent One, love has a way of engraving ones heart and soul. This is a magnificent write. Your pen is one of such beauty <3 ~BJ
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Date: 2/27/2022 3:16:00 PM
A voyage of beauty you have taken us on SO. Flowing love and imagery abound . A tribute full of longing, appreciation, opening and memory . Just beautiful. The eternal tattoo is very evident in your words . Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 2/27/2022 8:48:00 AM
Your pen was working overtime on this wonderful write. When I grow up, can I write like you??? Your words dance across the paper. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 2/25/2022 4:24:00 AM
It seems that she, as your muse, has indeed engraved an eternal tattoo Silent One! Your exquisite poetry is always a part of you! Happy Friday !!!
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Date: 2/24/2022 11:40:00 PM
What a beautiful write S1...Am just amazed at the fact that how those apt words find you and they flow so well in all your poems...I loved how well you connected all the words related to 'sparkle' and 'illuminate' from the beginning to the end. God bless...~ Ani
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Date: 2/23/2022 8:26:00 PM
Classic poetry, S O, one for bygone ages, and today, and well into tomorrow.
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Date: 2/23/2022 9:36:00 AM
So romantic and poignant! Your passionate lines and enchanting images mesmerize me! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 2/23/2022 8:51:00 AM
Vividly descriptive and appealingly romantic, S.O.! Janice
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Date: 2/23/2022 5:51:00 AM
Your poem is alluring in its vocabulary and essence, SO:)
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Date: 2/22/2022 4:34:00 PM
Such a passionate and alluring poem. Your gift of poetry at its best. Your imagery and exquisite descriptions drew me into the poem. Write On! Bill
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Date: 2/22/2022 2:41:00 PM
With lines like “I followed its path of sparkling stardust upon malachite meadows,” I was lost in the beauty of your romantic words and elated with your ending. Bravo! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/22/2022 5:48:00 AM
A beautiful poem from a romantic soul. Very touching.
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Date: 2/21/2022 10:35:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Silent One. ~Anna
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Date: 2/21/2022 7:35:00 PM
Those "internal butterflies" seem to flutter within the heart, leaving you breathless. This is beautiful in so many wonderful ways. Your words shine, Silent One. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/21/2022 6:19:00 PM
You take a poem and make it come to life. So vivid are your descriptions that you dip us in the story and immerse us through and through. Another great masterpiece, from the one who lets Silence speak volumes, :)
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Date: 2/21/2022 3:23:00 PM
Very lovely, romantic writing: "her diamond tears trickled upon my chest, like little stars glittering in her gloom, concluding our unwritten poem, memorised within the backstreets of our minds." Sooooo beautiful!
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Date: 2/21/2022 2:20:00 PM
Wow. Love it as usual. Tatoo..hum? So nice and so intense, powerful poetry for sure. Love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/21/2022 12:50:00 PM
The splendor of love is reflected in the splendor of your images, Silent One. A memorable example is "Suddenly a jewel from the sky descended like sunset." Thank you for sharing, Evelyn
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