Psalm 23 as felt when invoked

The conscience is my guide;
soul’s compass infallible.

Befriending silence, I dwell in the vast void;
freed from fetters of dark desire.

Holy Spirit makes me complete:
entwining polarities, awakening within heart boundless bliss,
my staircase to heaven.

Organic form is but a garment, so death holds for me no dread,
my heart’s untouched by evil,
for You dwell within me,
rod of initiation within my spine energised.

Rising above my lower mind and the incessant cravings of ego,
Your grace in-pours from the fontanel,
behold soma nectar overspill!

Like a child I hold Your hand,
breath by breath, day and night,
for you oh Lord are the dweller of my heart
forever.

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Date: 5/24/2024 5:35:00 PM
Well, the Lord is your conscience or should be at least. I agree that God is an infallible guide. This was a little different than I imagined entries sounding but you did a pretty good job with your message. Also thank you for entering my contest even if you don't really read scripture. Congrats on your placement of HM.
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:35:00 PM
Ah yes, very few have invoked the kundalini within and so are unaware of Holy Spirit in actuality. Thanks for hosting and for the recognition, God bless.
Date: 4/23/2024 9:36:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. A beautiful rewrite of Psalms 23
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Date: 4/24/2024 12:00:00 AM
In fact any scriptural write, from any religion, apart from the dos and don’ts, essentially symbolises energisation of form by kundalini, chi or Holy Spirit within.
Date: 4/23/2024 9:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely Psalm 23 write. Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away.........................
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Date: 4/23/2024 9:26:00 AM
I’m not into scriptures but direct experience yet gave it a shot anyway!
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