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The Die Is Cast

there’s a seismic gap
between the then and now
i see it widen
with every gaping breath
working your way
to the other world
the fog is clearing
the bridge appearing

that’s it
the time has come
you’re leaving me
hardly by choice
goodbye to dreams
we shared

just one more i love you
another smile
one more connection
as nightfall descends
i hear the moon beckon



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on April 15, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:41 AM
wow, what a gem here . Love this!
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:50 AM
thank you very much, Andrea~
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 1:06 AM
A very beautiful poem filled with emotions Line. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! Blessings xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thanks, Connie. Much appreciated.
Seeker Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 10:38 PM
So beautifully and metaphorically portrayed! Congrats on your win, Line! A favourite
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. Most appreciated ~
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