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Come to me my beloved,
save me from life's brutalities,
so this heart can soften -
sparkle like a million fireflies.

For you hold the light
to illuminate my soul.
For you are the ceremony
and I the dance.
As you come near,
I'll spin like a mad man,
dancing in the rain.

If to touch you is a sin,
then I am a sinner,
yearning to sin till my last breath.

If to hold you, means to lose everything,
then I will live as a penniless man,
rich within the luxuries of your affection.

If to love you is a crime,
then I am a criminal,
lock me away and dispose of the key,
chain me within the chambers of your heart.

If this is my last poem,
then let these words become spirits,
sleeping within the sacred sanctuary 
of your supernal soul.

Silent One
Simple Musing
5 January 2019



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Date: 2/23/2019 7:40:00 PM
I love everything about this poem! It is very romantic and it has a lot of imagery plus your presentation awesome! You are truly a gifted writer blessed by God.
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Date: 2/6/2019 5:30:00 AM
Wildly romantic and incredibly beautiful. The reader knows the writer has known true immortal love. Touched and watched by angels
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:30:00 AM
Silent One, your poem is absolutely beautiful, well done :)
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Date: 2/4/2019 1:52:00 PM
Hello Silent One, wow! A lovely poem you have created. I have enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem!
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Date: 1/30/2019 7:35:00 PM
You have loved. And you are complete and such a sanctimonious melting of emotional glee you have swallowed and penned. You are a beautiful soul SO. Kelli
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Date: 1/25/2019 11:30:00 AM
Your free verse is absolutely Magnificent, Silent One.. I really enjoyed, as this is a fav. For me.. Touches the soul!! Touched mine.. Have a Blessed day!
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Date: 1/24/2019 12:52:00 PM
A beautiful, passionate poem Silent one. Blessings, Susan
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Date: 1/15/2019 7:43:00 AM
Such passion Silent One! To be loved in that way is truly marvelous as is your poem! Happy Tuesday !!!
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:04:00 PM
Simply beautiful
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Date: 1/12/2019 3:12:00 PM
Like a bright light, love draws the moth to it, irrespective of the end result. A most heartfelt write, S-1. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:55:00 PM
Well, S O, I'm certainly hoping it's not, but if this is, or should be, your "last poem", you'd certainly end with a bang and not a whimper, and would continue to blaze very brightly for a long, long time.
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Date: 1/12/2019 11:29:00 AM
Such beautifully expressed emotions of a true and deep love my friend. I have always sen that your verses are of highest quality and convey message/meaning to the readers! Which is a true and valid mark of great poet my friend! A fav.. a true gem..
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Date: 1/11/2019 10:37:00 PM
Swoonworthy write my friend :) xomo
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Date: 1/11/2019 5:54:00 PM
S O my friend, you never cease to amaze me with your extreme talent. I read this to my wife and her response was, "that's poetry"! She is absolutely right. Oh, to have a third as much real poetic finesse. Thank you for such a great write.
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Date: 1/11/2019 12:17:00 AM
Nice write.
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Date: 1/10/2019 9:59:00 AM
If this was your last poem..I would come and read it every day...because such a beautiful poem this is.It speaks of how deeply love can go...Love risks so much...some say Love risks more than it is worth. But I'd say to find Love.It is worth everything.....even losing so much at times..Fantastic post.
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:33:00 AM
I am in complete and utter awe of this poem - a poet of note and worth is what you are, and always will be Silent One! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/8/2019 3:55:00 PM
Title wise, hope not,,,an amazing read, love this...S.O
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Date: 1/8/2019 2:50:00 PM
:) always beautiful
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Date: 1/7/2019 4:41:00 PM
This is so beautiful! If this was your last poem, it is amazing! Lucky is any who read this piece. Delightful for the soul.
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Date: 1/6/2019 5:29:00 PM
I really like how you did this theme. One of your best works, Silent One. I felt so silly when I clicked on the number one poems for your last contest and realized you did not specifically ask for one liners. Anyway. I do love the one liner contests!! I need to read directions better though.
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Silent One
Date: 1/7/2019 3:11:00 PM
Don't worry, I don't think you were the only one.. Thanks..
Date: 1/6/2019 3:38:00 PM
This radiates poetry beauty while touching emotions of fact and fantasy, a like. I was gladly held by each stanza streaming love's treasures worthy of losing all else. Beautiful. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Silent One
Date: 1/7/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you CayCay..
Date: 1/6/2019 2:20:00 PM
Hi Silent, if this were your last poem the soup would be a far sadder place. Your poetry illuminates. As we know it isn't I should just go on with my comment. An excellent write as always my friend. This is more than simple musings, this write comes from the heart, an emotional waterfall that entrances with its poetic grace. You take free verse to a different level. I feel the spirit of the poem. I always feel when I read your poetry. A fave. Your friend always....Mike.
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Silent One
Date: 1/7/2019 3:10:00 PM
Mike,you have always been a wonderful friend and always supported my poems, it is because of great poets like yourself, I stick around here... Thank you...
Date: 1/6/2019 8:42:00 AM
A great quote! An amazing song! It shouldn't be your last poem! It couldn't be your last musing! Such a depth! Such a beauty! Such a talent! An abundance of wonders from you, Silent One, we are to revel in.. A great musing! A heartfelt profound message.. a FAV. for me. Best regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 1/7/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for you kind words Besma..
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