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Bloggers PhotoChetta is the nom de plume of Deborah Guenther Beachboard a poet writing since 1992. Her poetry has been published in Modern Haiku, Sijo West, Amaze: The Cinquain Journal, Short Stuff, Twilight Ending and numerous other online and in print journals.

After taking a 10 year hiatus from writing (for reasons not interesting enough to share) Chetta returned to writing, most recently having poetry published in Periwinkle Pelican, Puddick, Stygian Press, Snoozine, and Sweet Smell.

Chetta makes her home in the Adna Valley in southwest Washington in the beautiful Pacific Northwest.

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Half Immersed: a favorite poem, part 1 (edit 02/04)

Blog Posted:1/30/2024 12:54:00 PM
My maternal grandmother was Finn. While doing a short biography for her (which will be discussed in part 2 of this blog) I discovered what would become one of my favorite poems:

(Edit: 02/04/2014, The poem's title is actually "To Catch a Wave".)

If I could catch a wave
as it flows toward shore
I would hold its sparkling coolness
cupped within my hand,
Watch it shimmer without spilling

Until I splashed it high up to the sky
to form starry flakes of filigree
to float down upon my upturned face
to feel to taste to drink to savor

As I savor love
which I hold shimmering,
cupped within my hands
...and then let go.

~by Ali Jarvenpa
from "Half Immersed"

I was unable to find much information about the poet. All I found was 1) a blurb about her book Half Immersed and Other Poems and 2) her obituary.

1) Aili Jarvenpa's poems give the reader an insight into the joys of a tender childhood on a Minnesota farm with her Finnish-immigrant parents. 

2) Aili Jarvenpa, 1918 - 2002, passed away after a long battle with Alzheimer's. She was preceeded in death by her husband, Oliver Jarvenpa. She was survived by three children.. She was a University of Minnesota graduate and worked as a teacher. A respected poet, translator and editor, she also wrote/edited seven books and was very involved in promoting Finnish culture.

Copies of her book Half Immersed and Other Poems are hard to find. I did find two copies on Amazon. One was available for $10, the other for more that $300. I guess you know which one I bought!

Two of her other books are available at Thrift Books: AiliJarvenpa



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Date: 1/30/2024 3:35:00 PM
Did your maternal grandmother write that poem? It's so lovely.
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Date: 1/30/2024 7:00:00 PM
No. Her creativity was in flowers and vegetable plants. She operated 3 greenhouses, specializing in fuchsia baskets. They were beautiful.

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