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An Elfchen. See Mark Toney's explanation and example "Butter."
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/butter_1700951
Created for MT's Flash Poetry Challenge (8)

Roses In Winter

     Roses,
     in winter,
     her eyes bright 
     like a summer sun~
     surprise!

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Mark Toney

January 26, 2025 at 8:13 AM

Chetta, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). I love how you contrast the winter backdrop with the wonderful "surprise!" of colorful roses, lighting up her eyes "like a summer sun!" A Fav poem for me.

Chetta Achara

January 26, 2025 at 10:47 AM

Hi Mark. Short poems are quite a challenge to give the most emotional impact is so few words. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Roses In Winter

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