Notes About The Poem
For: SHOW ME A CHOKA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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Life has become small 
with age and the pall of death
discoloring once vibrant
joy, and old laughter 
echoes down the corridors,
fading fast into shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Carmack Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:48 AM
This is my favorite among the list. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Congrats, Chetta! A noteworthy write!
Dutta Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 7:34 PM
Big Congrats to win Top on your well deserved poem. Have Good Days
Brul Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 6:24 PM
So beautiful! I love this! A fave for me. Congratulations!^__^
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