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Love Is Lost

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For: When You Are Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

Love may be lost in the process of age and hidden in the miserly sunset of life, draining like a father's cold sweat. Oh, that you could absorb my red-hot rage and exist in a long moment with me as though life and love were newly begun, as if it were lace dainty and finespun, with hopes now aglow on a sparkling sea~ but the sea has become angry and rough capsizing and drowning us in its wrath; love is forgotten as death lays its path and quietude wraps you up in a huff.

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Date: 1/21/2025 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. Way to go. Thank you for your participation. Sara K
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