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For: Skating Upon Saturns Rings Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sara Jama

Skating upon Saturn's rings my dreams are laced with silver stars and stardust weaves a tapestry becoming both the dreamer and the dreamed. Let me spin in the dance of galaxies, let the essence of myself become a symphony of light in the hush of cosmic night

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Date: 2/25/2025 8:09:00 AM
This is so beautiful and so celestial and cosmically pleasing too! I absolutely love your wordplay and the flow of your poem too here, especially love the lines “ Let me spin in the dance of galaxies, let the essence of myself become a symphony of light” how stunning and soulfully moving! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/25/2025 9:34:00 AM
Thank you.

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