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For: Skating Upon Saturns Rings Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sara Jama

Skating Upon Saturn's Rings

Skating upon Saturn's rings
     my dreams are laced 
          with silver stars
and stardust weaves a tapestry
     becoming both the dreamer
          and the dreamed.
Let me spin
     in the dance
          of galaxies,
let the essence of myself 
     become a symphony of light
          in the hush of cosmic night
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Empress Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 8:09 AM
This is so beautiful and so celestial and cosmically pleasing too! I absolutely love your wordplay and the flow of your poem too here, especially love the lines “ Let me spin in the dance of galaxies, let the essence of myself become a symphony of light” how stunning and soulfully moving! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light
Achara Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Thank you.
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