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"Enter through the narrow gate. For wide is the gate and broad is the road that leads to destruction, and many enter through it. But small is the gate and narrow the road that leads to life, and only a few find it." ~Matthew 7:13-14 NIV We are not immortal, child, and you have done your share of running wild. Running until you hit that wall, child, there are only two paths through which way will you fall? He has let you play awhile, child, but in the end your soul laid bare, with tears of sorrow; there's no tomorrow.

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Date: 3/11/2025 8:14:00 PM
I liked this. There is a moral lesson inside this poem.
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Date: 3/11/2025 9:37:00 AM
What a lovely/powerful write you have here. So True... "Great Picture" Love how you added Matthew 7:13-14 NIV. Have a blessed day as you write away................
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Date: 3/10/2025 9:23:00 PM
I detect a pensive mood in this contemplation for truth search
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/10/2025 9:49:00 PM
I do have fewer days ahead of me than I have behind me, and even though I accepted Jesus as my savior 38 years ago, I still ponder...

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