Notes About The Poem
For: SPIN A SHADORMA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Hermit

Hermit's shack
off the beaten tract
way out back
where young eyes
will not see and won't be sad
about love passed by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 4:29 PM
I really like this one. Nice to see it on winner list
Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. In life, some like it off the beaten tract. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 3:09 PM
Interesting…seems the hermit hurts, but has no intention to involve the innocent.
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