Hermit

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For: SPIN A SHADORMA Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Hermit's shack
off the beaten tract
way out back
where young eyes
will not see and won't be sad
about love passed by.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2025 4:29:00 PM

I really like this one. Nice to see it on winner list

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2025 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. In life, some like it off the beaten tract. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2025 3:09:00 PM

Interesting…seems the hermit hurts, but has no intention to involve the innocent.