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The Love of My Life

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For: A 5-Liner on your Life Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

The love of my life did not love me, And I have pined for him these long lonely years. He did not see the many tears I have cried, Why, oh why, did he not care about me? Now he has died and I am lonelier still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/23/2025 3:51:00 AM
I love this so true and emotional, congratulations
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Date: 3/22/2025 3:10:00 PM
Love how emotive this is, Chetta. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/17/2025 5:07:00 PM
A wonderful entry to the contest, my friend.
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Date: 3/16/2025 8:36:00 AM
Your poem well describes the love that never bloomed. You did all you could.
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Date: 3/14/2025 8:44:00 PM
Sad, indeed.
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