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For: Sanford-style tanka
Sponsor: Suzette Richards

the lone light

the lone light
illuminates rain
falling fast
into restless waves
and her heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 13, 2024 at 6:50 PM
I enjoy your tanka. Water is very sensual. Your description adds so much to a few words.
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