The hummingbird still comes to the feeder hung to delight the aged eyes of Mum, shadowed now with twilight, and to dance with her inner sprite. The bird has not forsaken winter, still sparkles with the dew of spring and with the warmth of summer, making mother's inner child sing of joy the afterlife will bring.
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