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 The Sea, by Koga Harue, 1929

Maybe Fantasy, Maybe Hallucination

I paint a whimsy in my mind,
A quiet place and pretty,
Where I can simply dream
Child-like without the nitty-gritty 
Of the city's less then kind imagination. 

In reverie, the gurus say, the mind
Will try visualization, the machinations
Of the Universe, or so it may seem,
But in truth it's just an aberration
Of Reality's unending hallucination!
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June 20, 2025 at 11:26 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Great Picture... Love It... "Good Luck" I also did this contest Have a lovely day writing away...............
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