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 The Sea, by Koga Harue, 1929
I paint a whimsy in my mind, A quiet place and pretty, Where I can simply dream Child-like without the nitty-gritty Of the city's less then kind imagination. In reverie, the gurus say, the mind Will try visualization, the machinations Of the Universe, or so it may seem, But in truth it's just an aberration Of Reality's unending hallucination!

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Date: 6/20/2025 11:26:00 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Great Picture... Love It... "Good Luck" I also did this contest Have a lovely day writing away...............
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