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Carefully Packed

Time is like a suitcase,
each moment carefully packed
for memory's journey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 12:32 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Carefully Packed" write. Great Picture... So Very True... Have a fun day writing away...............
Achara Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Thank you.
Brotherton Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Sometimes I think my suitcase has a whole in it. When I try to open it, only pieces remain.
Achara Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 12:56 PM
It becomes interesting when I remember things differently than my siblings remember it. LOL
Greenhough Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:06 AM
I smile. It sounds like the many suitcases I have packed. Nice read.
Achara Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Thank you.
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