Staircase

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For: VISIONS OF A VIGNETTE 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

The Hang Nga guesthouse, also called a "fairy tale house," located in Da Lat, Vietnam.


          What waits
          beyond the top~
          golden and worn
          from countless going up
          those fair wooden stairs, but none
          coming down?

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2025 5:29:00 PM

i like the deep philosopher/poet in you, cheta, provocative and insightful...congrats and thanks for joining my challenge!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2025 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K