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A Rambling Poet~ , My SweetHeart, Linda-Marie, My Polonesian Princess "Nikko" and my Beloved "Barbara"
I was born in the Beautiful Berkshire Hills in Western Massachusettes Growing up in Foster Homes in the 50's I never knew of Family LOVE or LOVE at all I was Married on 8/25/71  I was Widowed on 8/25/71 my Black Heart still Exists with-in my POETRY, My Family
"POETRYSOUP" Keeps me going My Mentor "Carol Brown" was with me from the Days of POETRY.com I will redo this Bio when I know more about HOW to do it I spent 15 years in High School no extra Education when I read some of the Bio's on site I think' am I a POET? Do I pretend to be?  I must Thank my Most Only Beloved " Barbara Jean Gorelick " for my " PM " Please tell me What Faults are Written with-in this Bio
Your Liege Always...HG 

Unknown POETS

Blog Posted:8/30/2015 11:53:00 PM

Dear Team POETRYSOUP, POETESSES, and POETS, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Did you know that 92.7% of all first poems by Poets on POETRYSOUP are Featured on the Home page. What a thrill for the up and coming Laureate. Now with confidence soaring the POET decides to enter a Member contest and maybe add to thier repertoire of thier QUILL. They decide to enter a Contest that presents a New Form of POETRY : End Line Word. Reading the format qualifications and reading the examples given begins working on the POEM. Checking the updates : 34 out of the 35 poems asked for are posted. The rookie POET quickly finishing The Perfect "End Line Word POEM and posts it.

  Mean while the sponsor reads POEM 35, which has nothing to do with the requested format. Closes the contest and begins to place the End Line Word POEMS. The Contest Placements are POSTED.

A day later the Sponsor gets a SOUP Mail from a Rookie POET it reads; "Dear Harry, my name is Paul I entered your contest; End Line Word POEM and am wondering why I did not place in the contest not even an Honorable Mention. Please tell me what i did wrong.

Reply to Paul ;  Dear Paul I have just read YOUR End Line Word  Entree, which I did not receive in my contest. If I had gotten sooner it would have replaced No. 2 POEM. I had 6 POEMS that did not follow the format but I could not delete them to make room for YOUR POETIC Tapestry. Do not be discouraged as I'm pretty sure other sponsors do not have a problem with poems that do not follow the Sponsors format. I do Congratulate YOU on YOUR End Line Word POEM being Featured. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

 



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Date: 9/1/2015 10:10:00 PM
Hi Daniel, Friend. I'm hoping you are well. Sometimes, I wish poets would send soup mail asking what they did wrong in my contest. Any question is better than no question, but instead they keep entering the same poem different title, (same mentality) over and over. LOVE--- LINDA
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Date: 8/31/2015 3:15:00 PM
As a newbie here's my 2 cents. You have to put a line in the sand or people would be forever asking for extensions. It's natural for people to think what they wrote is brilliant and of course there is high chance of your first poem featuring which adds to this sense. But I'm not sure pestering the judge achieves anything. The longer I'm on here the more I realise the diversity of tastes. Even reading comments on poems is helpful. Andrea quite often mentions meter so I have tried to read up on that (still struggling) others mention imagery and I've read about trying to make comments more concrete or solid. It's all part of the learning process. Miss out on a deadline? A new lesson learnt.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/31/2015 3:28:00 PM
Good comment, Mark. And about meter, I only prefer meter for certain forms. Not all forms require meter. I think imagery is always important and just writing sentences that look a bit polished! You are a SMART newbie to notice what's up!
Date: 8/31/2015 9:49:00 AM
I have missed several contests entry deadlines by a day or two before. My poem -- God's Kind of Poetry, was such a miss. One I was sure would have placed high. Sad but happens , so I made no bones about it. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/gods_kind_of_poetry_602072
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Date: 8/31/2015 8:10:00 AM
Well my view is .., this is why we have so many entries allowed and closing dates, I think we need to honor that and guess what, I have a long list of poems that did not place in a contest and I have never gone whining to the sponsor about it, we were all new once so to me that is a lame excuse, next time the person needs to enter on time. I would not reopen the contest because then where do you stop and that expectation is unfair to the poets who did enter on time ... just my opinion of course
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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2015 8:24:00 AM
Harry, you say the winners are posted ? Where?
Date: 8/31/2015 6:38:00 AM
That did happen to me in my first few contests while in the process of closing a new entry was added that I did not know about, so there was an extra one dangling in the "read" box even after I had posted the winners. Some things are just out of our control, I did enjoy your end line word poem contest as well, cannot wait to see the winners list
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My Past Blog Posts

 
End Line Word Contest finals
Date Posted: 11/4/2015 9:58:00 AM
Unknown POETS
Date Posted: 8/30/2015 11:53:00 PM
If I had a Broken Heart, Contest results
Date Posted: 7/23/2015 10:47:00 AM
Dear POETRYSOUP - 2
Date Posted: 5/23/2013 11:00:00 PM
HGarvey Daniel Esquire, Harry, HG, or Liege - update
Date Posted: 5/14/2013 8:06:00 AM
I LOVE YOU LENORE
Date Posted: 4/16/2013 7:13:00 PM
Yahoo - off line in Vermont
Date Posted: 3/22/2013 8:57:00 PM
Memory of a Senile Old Man
Date Posted: 3/19/2013 12:52:00 PM
A Boon from my Family : POETRYSOUP
Date Posted: 3/4/2013 11:49:00 AM
Thank-you Poetrysoup
Date Posted: 2/13/2013 1:54:00 PM
Thank-YOU "POETRYSOUP"
Date Posted: 1/18/2013 10:26:00 AM
Hello Poetess and Poet
Date Posted: 1/7/2013 12:50:00 PM
Immortal Tears Joined FOREVER
Date Posted: 11/30/2012 9:15:00 AM
Hello Everybody
Date Posted: 11/3/2012 10:32:00 AM
" Happy Birthday, L'il Sis, " SHARON WEIMER "
Date Posted: 6/22/2012 7:26:00 AM
Happy Easter - POETRYSOUP and FAMILY
Date Posted: 4/8/2012 8:22:00 AM
Someplace Safe
Date Posted: 3/27/2012 11:01:00 AM
" My L E N O R E "
Date Posted: 3/21/2012 8:03:00 AM
POETRY Hodgepodge Contest
Date Posted: 2/26/2012 8:22:00 PM
" POETRY " - "Hodge-Podge"
Date Posted: 2/21/2012 9:24:00 AM
Contest Results
Date Posted: 2/3/2012 7:44:00 PM
Middle of the Road Contest Update
Date Posted: 1/16/2012 9:41:00 AM
Middle of the Road Contest
Date Posted: 12/27/2011 9:58:00 PM
Merry Christmas to all of my Family
Date Posted: 12/19/2011 7:11:00 PM
It Hurts
Date Posted: 12/12/2011 11:20:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
1/26/2019 The Blest Poetess Rhymecelebrity,how i feel,
12/26/2018 Tribute - 2 Rhymededication,devotion,tribu
12/26/2018 Tribute Rhymeinspiration,love,tribute,
11/2/2018 If I Could - Part 1 Rhymebereavement,first love,gr
7/22/2018 A Tear's Dream - Part - 3 Free versedeath,dream,lost love,mis
6/26/2018 A Tear's Dream - Part 2 Free versedream,lost love,love,memo
6/23/2018 A Tear's Dream - Part 1 Free versefuture,grief,heartbroken,
6/22/2018 Happy Birthday - L'Il Sister Rhymefamily,love,sister,
6/12/2018 To - a Retired Poetess Quaternappreciation,dedication,i
6/8/2018 The Heart of a Poet Speaks - Part 5 Narrativeendurance,first love,grie
6/1/2018 A Path Un Traveled Part 4 Rhymedeath,how i feel,lonely,
6/1/2018 You Are Free verseheartbroken,love,wife,
6/1/2018 Spirit From the Past Free versememory,sister,spiritual,
6/1/2018 One Spirits Quaterndeath,love,wife,
2/3/2018 Dinner Free verseanimal,food,
1/21/2018 Cain Rhymei love you,lost love,wife
1/21/2018 Fall Pantoumautumn,mountains,septembe
6/12/2016 Colours - 2 Haikudeath,lost love,love,wife
6/11/2016 Colours Haikulost love,wife,
6/9/2016 Soon Senryulove,love hurts,wife,
2/10/2016 Queen - Barbara Jean Haikuheart,life,love,
8/20/2015 Four Hours of Eternity - 4 Narrativeanniversary,child,life,wi
7/31/2015 Brokenheart -Re Submit- Concretelife,lost love,love,wife,
7/29/2015 After Life - End Line Word Poem - Free verselife,love,wife,
6/20/2015 Broken Spell Check Rhymehumor,spoken word,
6/13/2015 Reminds Me Listlife,love,remember,wife,
2/5/2015 Blazing Eagles Sonnetdeath,love,wife,
9/23/2014 Shadows Past Cont Sonnetgod,life,love,wife,
6/13/2014 Shadows Past Rhymedeath,
12/20/2013 Lonely Thanksgivings Senryuholiday,lost love,wife,th
11/28/2013 Thanksgiving Day - Thanks Rhymefaith,god,life,spiritual,
10/5/2013 Four Hours of Eternity - 3 Narrativefaith,god,imagination,ins
9/21/2013 Four Hours of Eternity - Part 2 Narrativedream,god,
9/20/2013 Four Hours of Eternity - Part 1 Narrativegod,wife,
7/15/2013 I Am the Shell of a Poet Rhymebeauty,death,life,love,
6/24/2013 A Shell of a Poet Free versedeath,dream,goodbye,love,
6/12/2013 Remembering When Rhymelove,marriage,wife,
5/26/2013 Birth of a Poet Narrativefamily,love,
5/5/2013 Dear Poetrysoup Free versefamily,inspiration,love,
5/3/2013 To My Dearest Most Only Beloved Narrativefirst love,love,wife,
4/20/2013 A Letter To My Angel Lenore Free versebereavement,i love you,
4/16/2013 I Love You Free verselove,wife,heart,heart,lov
4/16/2013 I Love You Lenore Free verselove,wife,
4/15/2013 Spring Showers Free versemountains,natural disaste
4/15/2013 I Love You Lenore Free versegod,jesus,love,wife,wife,
4/10/2013 The Backside of Killington Mountain Free verseanimal,life,nature,spring
3/24/2013 I Envy the Weekend Sonnetfamily,lonely,wife,work,w
3/23/2013 Andrea the Poetess Sonnetdedication,flower,inspira
3/23/2013 Home - 3 Haikuhome,love,wife,
3/23/2013 Home - 2 Haikuhome,nature,
3/23/2013 Home Haikuhome,nature,
3/13/2013 Wednesday August 25th, 1971 Rhymelove,marriage,wife,sun,
3/5/2013 Favorite Poems Rhymefamily,lost,sad,poets,
2/14/2013 Happy Valentines Day Free versefamily,love,sister,day,ha
1/20/2013 Harry Rhymebrother,love,sister,words
1/19/2013 Love Conquers All - Scene 3 Narrativegirlfriend,life,love,wife
1/11/2013 My God's Awesome Wonder Rhymedeath,god,love,death,deat
1/8/2013 Library I do not know?family,
12/24/2012 I Recieved What I Prayed For Rhymefather,god,jesus,life,lov
12/22/2012 Before Death - After Life Nonetdeath,god,jesus,life,love
12/19/2012 Rescue Squad-16 - Part-3 Narrativenatural disasters,snow,wi
12/13/2012 Love Conquers All - Scene 2 Narrativefamily,friendship,love,ca
12/12/2012 Core Belief Rhymechristian,faith,god,grief
12/11/2012 Love Conquers All Narrativefamily,friendship,love,so
12/8/2012 My Love Listhope,love,love,
12/7/2012 Winter Trees Rhymelove,nature,winter,winter
12/4/2012 Rescue Squad-16 - Part 2 Narrativelife,nature,birthday,morn
12/2/2012 Rescue Squad 16 Narrativeadventure,natural disaste
12/1/2012 I Miss - 5 Listeducation,food,
11/30/2012 Snowflakes Haikunature,seasons,
11/28/2012 Thyme To Ketchup Inn English Language - Repost Free versefunny,imagination,
11/28/2012 English Language - 2 - Repost Free versefunny,imagination,love,
11/28/2012 English Language - 1 - Repost Free versefunny,imagination,people,
11/28/2012 Poetic Hodge-Podge - Repost Rhymefunny,hope,love,
11/28/2012 Hodge - Podge Again - Repost Rhymefunny,imagination,
11/28/2012 More Hodge-Podge - Repost Rhymefunny,imagination,
11/28/2012 Hodge-Podge - Repost Free versefunny,imagination,
11/27/2012 Gramar - Hodge-Podge Rhymeconfusion,education,imagi
11/26/2012 What Is Love -2 Rhymeimagination,love,
11/25/2012 What Is Love Rhymeimagination,lost,lost,lov
11/20/2012 When Your Dead Your Dead Rhymefriendship,love,wife,
11/18/2012 I Miss - 4 Rhymenature,
11/15/2012 Soon Senryudeath,love,wife,future,
11/11/2012 My Last Blog Narrativeangst,
11/11/2012 I Miss - 3 Rhymeanimals,love,nature,,Lull
11/8/2012 I Miss - 2 Rhymelove,nature,beauty,beauty
11/3/2012 I Miss Rhymelove,nature,
11/2/2012 Xliamp To Barbara Jean Nonetgirlfriend-boyfriend,love
11/2/2012 I Don'T Want To Leave My Home - 2 Free verselove,nature,seasons,beaut
10/31/2012 I Don'T Want To Leave My Home Rhymelife,love,nature,perspect
10/23/2012 Lonely Heart Senryulove,heart,heart,
9/13/2012 A Nightmare Rhymedeath,fear,lost love,wife
9/11/2012 Again Free versefriendship,lost love,love
9/3/2012 Keeitai - Part 2 Narrativeanimals,native american,
8/26/2012 Keeitai Narrativeanimals,love,
8/7/2012 The Rhymedeath,love,
7/30/2012 The Pain In and of - Poetry Free verselove,
7/24/2012 The Spirit In and of Poetry Rhymelife,lost love,love,wife,
7/24/2012 Love's Forever Kiss Free verselife,love,wife,kiss,love,
7/24/2012 The Sorrow In and of Poetry Rhymelove,wife,

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~ Destiny ~ I do not know?life
~ Destiny Ii ~ I do not know?love
Forever Free verselost love,love,sympathyhe
A Cruise of Dreams Quatraindedicationheart,heart,
Ocean Waves Chokanature
He Is Risen Concretefaith,history,inspiration
A Poet Free versededication,friendship,lif
Love Is Who You Are ( Not, Just Something You Do ) Part 1 Rhymeinspirational,lovegod,god
Love Is Who You Are ( Not, Just Something You Do ) Part 2 Rhymeinspirational,lovelife,tr
Love Is Who You Are ( Not, Just Something You Do ) Part 3 Rhymeinspirational,lovelove,po
An Outer Unfold ( of Inner Gold ) Rhymeinspirational,lovelove,
The Pearl of Great Price Rhymeallegory,lovewife,love,
Ultimate Centerfold Girl Rhymeallegory,love
Love List Free verselove
Wise Men Still Seek Him Today Acrosticholiday,hope,inspirationa
God Blesses My Soul Coupletfaithme,me,
Dedicated To Narrativefriendship,
When All I'Ve Loved Rhymefaith
Edgar Allan Poe Rhymeon work and workingwrite,
H Garvey Daniel Esquire...My Poetry Friend Coupletfriendship,lovelove,
Memories For Sale Narrativenostalgiatime,
Itsy, Bitsy, Teenie, Weenie Brain Lyricfunny,political
For Hgarvey Daniel, Esquire Dramatic Monologuededication,friendship,on
I Closed My Eyes To See, I Now Dream Coupletlove,passionme,heart,hear
Where My True Love Lives - a Ballade Balladedeath,love,ocean,
Releasing Tears Free verselost love
Oh Vulturous World Rhymeconfusion,death,depressio
Silent Night Free verseheart,
My Liege Coupletfriendship,on writing and
Economic Globe of Instability Senryulife
Cheater Cheater Light Versefamily,fear,
Erotica Light Verselife,romance,sensual,
Mirror Light Versefear,me,woman,day,me,mirr
After the Storm Light Versefantasy,me,heart,sound,vo
Revive the Breakage Rhymeallegory,death,devotion,f
The Storm Has Moved On Haikunature,
Mustang Rhymecowboy-western,
Through Glowing Interludes Monorhymeanniversary,devotion,love
The End Part One Free versedeath,life,
Abused Heart Rhymerecovery from...,heart,he
Dead Winter Epicsnow,snow,
Insidious Haikuangst,depression,fear,
Fragments Haikudepression,life,loss,sad,
The Wind In My Mind Light Versefunny,memory,memory,time,
Wishes and Dreams Coupletday,deep,dream,health,lif
Mission Statement Rhymefunny,
Chef - Dad Quintain (English)family,father,life,love,m
Awakened To Dream Free verseart,depression,devotion,l
Favourite Thoughts Dramatic Monologueimagination,me,me,
Lamentable You Rhymeangst,life,loss,passion,r
Haiku 6 Haikunature,
Rust Rhymelife,
50 Shades of Gold Quatraineducation,me,
I Would Give Everything I do not know?caregiving,faith,family,
One Drop Free verselove,
Sherlock Coupletfunny,dog,dog,mum,
You Shall Never Die Free versededication,depression,dev
With God's Blessings Dramatic Versechildren,son,me,me,
Box of Sadness To:(Rambling Poet) Dramatic Versesadme,self,feelings,me,se
Passing Through Rhymelife,
The Potter Light Versefear,metaphor,
Pretty Flower In the Deep Woods Free versebeautiful,depression,happ
Love On High Free versefaith,
Old Man I do not know?children,health,old,peopl
My Mother Free verselove,mother,smile,
Silently Falling I do not know?nature,seasons,
The Snowmum Light Versefantasy,imagination,snow,
The Mind Hunter Free verseadventure,body,
Lost Chokaimagination,lost,snow,
Memories Lyricnostalgia,time,
My Final Wish Before I Go Lyricdeath,husband,love,husban
The Meaning of Love Quatrainlove,water,love,moon,pass
Making Plans For You Lyricwar,
Transformation Free versefreedom,
At the Gate of Dreamland Free versedesire,dream,passion,
What Easter Meant For Us Free versefaith,day,life,easter,day
Pallette Light Verseloveworld,child,
Dear Friend Free versedevotion,friend,thanks,tr
Your Father's Eyes Free verselife,
The Fine Poets Rhymededication,devotion,life,
Sleep Rhymeheaven,uplifting,
This Night Sonnet 
A Forest Child Coupletabsence,change,character,
Nevermore Free verseautumn,nature,nostalgia,
All Things Come From Above I do not know?devotion,faith,inspiratio
Where Is Your Chirping Dramatic Monologuenatural disasters,nature,
It's Just a Little Prick Rhymehumorous,
Love's Echo Rhymelove,
Her Requiem Rhymedeath,faith,mother,
Twilight Quatrainimaginationday,time,
Imagine Rhymeintrospection,
The Poet Quatrainpoets,writing,
These Eyes Have Often Been Solaced Free verseage,love,romantic,
The Woman and the Fisherman Narrativefirst love,fishing,girlfr

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