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~ ~ through eyes that glow ruffling your hair we warm the room with luminous stares a gentle ambrosia drapes the fragrant air with wine from your lips --- and just there this need to melt in immortal surrender kindles as rows of candlelight declare kept promise of twenty years deeply shared and while laugh lines crease slight wear and tear the charm of life’s interludes makes me aware ~ how we glide together still burning and bare ~ Russel Sivey’s Candlelight Contest By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 4/28/2017 5:54:00 AM
Good imagery. Beginning is nice. Ending without any decision is touching for me. Creativity in your verse is clearly seen. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Review my poems. Hope you'll enjoy Pari Style.
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:32:00 AM
Rich and sensual without being crass. Well thought out written and stated. A fitting ode to twenty years. Keep up the good work. Huggs TLee
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Nette. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 5:47:00 AM
Love the passion and heat in this one, well done! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely piece, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:15:00 AM
Hey...hoorrray for you.It is already in my Favs!
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Date: 3/10/2012 1:40:00 AM
passion and love just keeps ozzing as we travel the wors of the poetry....congrats on the placement........~sashi
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:24:00 PM
Always above and beyond in beauty, Nette! You always make your poems special! Congratulations once again!
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:27:00 PM
Congrats, nette. Outstanding piece. Well deserved win, my friend. Great job. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Have a great weekend and don't forget to Spring Ahead. Be well and God bless. luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:20:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on an exciting win for a lovely glow of candlight ..words of invitation and beauty my friend.. sooooo luv it..
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Date: 3/7/2012 3:35:00 AM
passion of the lastest line, bringing heat like red red wine, love it mate it was mine, well done here nette....
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:00:00 PM
sultry and steamy with a breath of romanvce and passion Nette luv.. deep emotion portrayed in every rhyming line luv.. good luck in contest.. sweets..
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:54:00 PM
An excellent entry for the contest Nette. It speaks of a lasting love that has weathered time and grown stronger because of it. Super job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:41:00 AM
Haaaaa! Into the world we came baring it all, now because of the stares we don't bare. Thanks for recent comment, Nette. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:34:00 AM
Romance 101!! I just love this Nette :) wishing you all the best for Russell's contest *hugs*
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:24:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Nette. I am feeling the glow. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/6/2012 3:44:00 AM
It glows nette.....a warm and romantic poem.- Luck to you in contest ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:48:00 AM
Dear Nette, I just read this, and immediately I put " THROUGH GLOWING INTERLUDES " on my Favorite POEM and POET YOU can not Imagine How deeply This POEM, Gently Touched my Heart and Congratulations on YOUR Win in the Contest LOVE YOU, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Admiring Liege...Harry SOUP Mail call
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:13:00 AM
wow, yours is really well written here, Nette. I love your entry. I am just going off now. Good night!!
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:06:00 AM
Ohh....this is sooo romantic Nette.It goes to my Favs!!
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:05:00 AM
Yes!First here!!
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