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The MIND HUNTER

In search of the human mind Different thoughts crossed my mind, a few conclusions I could not find The human mind has no stop! Receiving input, danger, before I blow my top Sometimes the light clicks I think I figured out the problem It's at the tip of my mind ;-) Sorry, my brain cells did it again, Ran out of THINK! When it comes to love, I'm brain dead! This is me talking to my brain, "Are you just being lazy, you fell too quick?" A game in a maze inside my head! Give me some help, or what use are you Open the way only you can unlock the door. Unfold my future, stop hiding the key How about it mind? Do you want me to put you back on pills? Stand back brain, while I explain your job. The Human mind is not easy to read like a book However, some are cruel limiting judgment, with one look The mind plays tricks when too much information is perceived The mind is related to the heart, sending signals the wrong way The mind works when the body's asleep (I call it a dream, I hope you don't mind I put it there!) The mind creates beauty, wonders of the world The mind is a soft whisper, a secret, my conscious ---I Swear The mind is devious, tricky can outsmart like a fox The mind is a beautiful thing to waste in a box The mind can journey, without leaving its nest The mind is knowledge, many fail to explore The mind is a Captain, traveling far and beyond The mind is like a paint brush, colorful art The mind is a creature who hides in a cave The mind is like pain, don't stop in its way The mind is like a mime who does not talk at all The mind is fragile, don't use it like a sponge The mind is like a pair of shoes, without the mind we're bare The bottom line is, the mind is a mystery! Don't mind me, I lost my mind, years ago :):):) (THOUGHTS)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/1/2015 6:21:00 PM
Linda, this is a fantastic write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 9/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
If a parsley farmer owes money do we garnish his wages.
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Date: 5/31/2014 7:40:00 AM
Lots of thinking going on in this poem. You are right the mind is a mystery! So much even left untouched. So much to explore and your descriptions are unique, a mime who does not talk, a creature in a cave. You've got my mind working. :)
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Date: 5/10/2014 10:04:00 PM
Wow woman what layers texture do I begin with in this boggling poem, I love your ending it pulls everything together at the end, your write about the mind being a complicated thing to understand, and sometimes it's just two confusing but we must do just that, enjoyed the read tonight, take care cheri
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Date: 1/5/2014 8:33:00 PM
Glad to see you have reviewed your work as well as others reviews. I thought this poem was very well thought out. On the wild side, and I have found that some of these lines speak to me. I've had similar sentiments, but not necessarily worded so poetry as how you've presented. Sleuthing around with the mind is quite the adventure. I think poetry is a great way to collect some of those adventures we personally have within. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/12/2013 2:06:00 PM
hum. can use a touch up
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Date: 8/27/2013 12:13:00 AM
yup,,,, the mind is there, and a lot of times it won't shut up ;} nicely done Linda ;}
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:36:00 AM
love this one, PD x
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:38:00 PM
Hiya R2D2 my Sweet Dark Friend, hmmm just don't sound right that lol. Yes the mind is a weird and wonderful thing, capable of all you said up there. An intriguing write and very clever too. How are you Linda? Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/11/2013 5:53:00 AM
Nice poem enjoyed.
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Date: 3/3/2013 1:10:00 PM
Dear Linda, Congratulations on this POETIC Tapestry being Featured. I read Carl's comment about florishing I say if Your POETRY started as a backyard garden, I see it now covers the whole Earth Suberp Pen a Favorite of mine. I'm off to comment to Mandy, Harry Horsman,Phyliss Babcock and Debra Guzzi will right to YOU later in the week LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 1/28/2013 4:18:00 AM
AWSUM!!!! I like this one. have a great day Linda. Wade
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Date: 12/14/2012 9:12:00 AM
love this, i'm already able to sus your mind...
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Date: 12/3/2012 12:09:00 PM
Hi Linda, i went back to your earlier posts to see how you evolved as a poet and my dear Linda, i must say, that your mind is a very creative tool blessed by god, you have flourished quite well as a poet and as gods creation, my theory on the mind is just let the wheel spin and write it down as you go. Blessings my friend, Carl
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Date: 9/2/2012 2:47:00 PM
LOL Linda you'll give yourself a headache..In Buddhist term [monkey mind]meaning "unsettled; restless; capricious; whimsical; fanciful; inconstant; confused; indecisive; uncontrollable". [Hey i got one too! It does no one any good!] Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2012 10:47:00 AM
Elegantly educative Linda - this composition is so valuable for me at this time because I am coming to a profound awakening about a very special Being - although I'm excited about knowledge, I know it demands tribute -this poem encapsulates what I'm intuitively exploring right now-thank you,Sphinx - my Odyssey is in full swing-with respect,J.A.B. ^^^
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Date: 7/28/2012 11:26:00 PM
I just had to read this piece again! In the above comment I am making reference to my Guardian Angel - Thanks for trusting your talent! J.A.B.
Date: 4/26/2011 7:10:00 PM
If you see mine will you send it home. Well written verse. Vince
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Date: 12/25/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations! Ammut~Lin~Ra
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Date: 12/23/2010 9:14:00 AM
congradulations on being featured. john
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:16:00 PM
enjoyed this layered piece P D good to see it featured.
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:16:00 AM
i read this as a featured write and am glad too have read it this way,because i certainly missed it in it's original posting...really enjoyed from beginning to end..."a creature in a cave..." coool..... :)...congrats on the feature , peace , jay
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:46:00 AM
Mind blowing write my friend , deserves the aclaim
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your work being featured this week..Just one page ahead of mine..Sara
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:58:00 PM
Congrats P.D. my BFF on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv... hoping and wishing the happiest holidays to u and yours with much luv... hoping u return to us soon..luv..
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