The Storm Has Moved On

the storm has moved on- sky painted now with pink gauze nestling on the hills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Palani Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. Best wishes, Suresh.
Esquire Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 6:23 AM
My LOVE Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR Win A Perfect Haiku Going into my Favorites LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS Eternal...Harry
Maverick Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Good write Barbara, just one question.. did you have to use ladders to get the gauze up there..? Just funni'n you..) and happy new year over there..!
Onclaud Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 3:04 AM
picture perfect, barbara... congrats on your special win!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 4:55 PM
oh, and Congratulations on the win
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 4:55 PM
wow, GREAT haiku, Barbara, Don't ever let it be said that you do not know how to haiku!
Pettit Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on winning with this fine haiku entry.
Sivey Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 10:18 PM
I like this write Barbara! Storms do leave a beautiful sky after they depart! Good illustration! Great Work!!
Merryman Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Lovely haiku, Barbara. Love Kim
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Yes I know.....thank you for sending the storm to my hometown/land. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU BARBARA ! oxox love Anne-Lise
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