A Nightmare

I staggered and weave to my bedroom down the hall
Good night JACK, as I swallow, drop the bottle, and fall
I Kick off my shoes, mumble my Prayers, “Maybe Tomorrow” 
I awake in the thickness of night, with a shattered Heart of Sorrow 

I hear whispers of my name, Who’s there? On goes the overhead light
My eyes search the room, no one is there; yet I feel an eerie presence
I ponder a moment; with a click I return to the labyrinth of the night 
Suddenly the stench of Death filled the room, fiery burning, evil incense

A whisper becomes a soothing voice; “Walk with me, Talk with me”
“Tell me how can YOU still LOVE YOUR Wife?, she bought a Life of Sorrow”
“I have washed my hands in the tears YOU Cry : Your Soul is very important to me”
“May I offer You Eternity, if You will follow me, I want to be Your GOD ; Tomorrow
                                                To be Continued

Author’s Note ; It took me 3 weeks to write this. I want to Thank Everyone for recent
Comments Soon I will spend time Commenting to all of MY POETIC Family. With LOVE
ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege… HG
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/5/2012 12:04:00 PM
sounds pretty deep.Haven't been on for awhile but I did post a couple new poems.hope you are doing well.
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Date: 9/25/2012 1:02:00 PM
Incredible wor as usual. Thanks a milion for your most gracious comments. Can wait for the continuation. You are inspiring to me and I am honore to have yo readmypoetry and to read yours. Please take care and I'll be visiting your page every once in a while for some more insight and inspiration. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/24/2012 3:39:00 PM
Good day My Liege...a sad and touching write..waiting to read the next bit! Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:19:00 PM
Hi Daniel, eternity is very convincing ... nice to see you here, and reading a new poem of yours.. i'll be looking forward to the continuous poem..... enjoyed stopping by ;-) Have yourself a goodnight~ PD
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