Mirror

I look in the mirror and what do I see
Who is that person looking at me?
I look round the back but no one is there
I don’t recognise, her she gives me a scare.
I check for the glass, my fingers touch it,
It’s cool and it’s silky, but the face does not fit.
Who is this person looking at me?

Nan told me once of the woman in the glass.
‘She gave me a fright I can tell you lass.
I walked past the mirror and what did I see
This old woman standing staring at me.
She came and haunted me every day,
I talked to her nicely and asked her to go away.
Day after day she visited often,
One day my sweet child it will then be your turn.’

I remember my Nan telling me these words,
I look at the reflection and it seems absurd
For standing in the mirror looking at me
Is a woman like my Nan or a facsimile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/15/2012 8:51:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. If I were staring into Your Mirrow and YOU were behind me to the side, and saw the reflection I would not be YOUR "Young man" POET anymore. This POEM is Down to Earth Perfect I am putting a lot of YOUR POEMS into my Favorites This is another one LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry I see YOUR online,Good Morning
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:36:00 AM
Oh boy know the feeling, this again is an excellent poem of yours, and again the subject matter so down to earth so poignant.. no mail as come through
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:37:00 AM
Congrats on this write...it shall do wonderful in the contest....childlike rhyming and great theme. Gwendolen
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/3/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thankyou its childlike rhyming because I have a childlike mind. Mandy x
Date: 11/2/2011 5:56:00 AM
There was a time when I went into the bathroom and looked into the mirror and for a split second wondered how my dad got there. Yikes. Tony
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:58:00 AM
I should have said my mother but my nan did actually tell me that. Bet your dad was a looker x
Date: 11/2/2011 5:32:00 AM
excellent rhyme :) i like this poem very much. thanks for posting! ------Ell
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:57:00 AM
Thankyou thats really nice of.x you
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