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Michele Godleske

A New Day

Luna fades to dream
As the sleepy Earth's eyelids
Begin to flutter...

Copyright © Michele Godleske | Year Posted 2005

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

January 17, 2010 at 9:48 AM

Dear Michele, Congratulations on YOUR Super Souper Featured POEM "A New Day" such a Perfect Haiku, in form and in the message in my Favorites it goes I will read more of YOU as YOU have impressed me so with this great Pen ALWAYS...HG

January 15, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Each line blends perfectly with the title. This haiku is without a doubt one of the best I've ever read. Congratulations to you!!---Milt

Debra Robillard

January 13, 2010 at 11:39 PM

I loved this one, Michelle

January 12, 2010 at 12:14 PM

Beautifully done, Michele.

January 11, 2010 at 2:01 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele >> James

January 11, 2010 at 11:01 AM

Beautiful, dreamy Haiku, Michele. Thank you for once again sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2010 at 4:59 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele. Love, Carol

January 10, 2010 at 5:18 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

January 10, 2010 at 3:11 PM

Michele,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

January 10, 2010 at 12:55 PM

Such a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Much captured in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

January 10, 2010 at 11:30 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

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