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A New Day

Luna fades to dream As the sleepy Earth's eyelids Begin to flutter...

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Date: 1/17/2010 9:48:00 AM
Dear Michele, Congratulations on YOUR Super Souper Featured POEM "A New Day" such a Perfect Haiku, in form and in the message in my Favorites it goes I will read more of YOU as YOU have impressed me so with this great Pen ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/15/2010 8:15:00 AM
Each line blends perfectly with the title. This haiku is without a doubt one of the best I've ever read. Congratulations to you!!---Milt
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Date: 1/13/2010 11:39:00 PM
I loved this one, Michelle
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Date: 1/12/2010 12:14:00 PM
Beautifully done, Michele.
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Date: 1/11/2010 2:01:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful, dreamy Haiku, Michele. Thank you for once again sharing your poetic talent. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michele. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:11:00 PM
Michele,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:55:00 PM
Such a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Much captured in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:30:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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