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in - pie - ces why must you be in fragments? take me pl— ease me in- to the pangs of oppression let me ROT in fragments i trust you'll be whole again while I break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 12/4/2012 11:53:00 AM
Dear Laura, What an awesome Haiku You are extreemely Talented. I wish I had not got sick so I could have keept reading YOUR Magnificent Work LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/19/2011 1:44:00 PM
that is brilliant, Laura. thank you for your very sweet comments. I enjoyed reading your poems :) Love, Sarah
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Date: 11/4/2011 3:03:00 AM
awesome haiku's, enjoyed these. harry
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Date: 11/3/2011 8:23:00 PM
Well well well; I'd love to hear you read this, as in concert. Of the course, I would be the sole soul. Dang; can you record this and make it possible for me to download your vocal reading of this write ? That would be awesome. I'll refrain at the moment from commenting on this write, that is in detail. As of now,; an awesom write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week...much love, james
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