James Fraser Poet Couplet

I Closed My Eyes To See, I Now Dream

Today I sat and pondered and closed my eyes to see 
On a sunny island I strolled, knowing what's ahead for me

Closer to the beach hut I could hear our favourite song
Through the louvred doors I go, as I catch a scent so beautifully strong

It's emanating from the bathroom, amidst a plume of moisture, steam
Slowly I reach my destination as I continue into my dream

My eyes peer through scented vapours, catching a shadow within my sight
Lavender surrounds two souls as I catch shapes of pure delight

My love, my maiden, my Queen, having exited from her shower
Thralls the man in me attracted by her womanly power

She glimpses she sees I'm there, her towel is offered to I
Closer we move to each other as my hands wander to dry

Her nape, shoulders and back touched as if by an angels wings
The song that lured me earlier, my heart now joyfully sings

To her hips I reach, whilst to my knees I fall
My heart now racing faster, my hands in drying sprawl

To me she now graces, azure blue eyes look down at me
Beauty in she abounds, through loved eyes my love I see

Crimson lips allure to mine, as if in magnetic trance
Naked we are, touching brushing, we enter into dance

Two bodies in tender abrasion, hands in adventurous roam
Alluring desires excite freely in our sunny island home

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Elaine George March 31, 2011 at 2:32 PM I was reading a poem of HG's where he wrote about this poem, so I just had to come and visit. Now I know why he wrote about it. Simply beautiful. James. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2011 at 11:18 PM QUite the dreamy dream of passion, james. Well done!

Wilma Neels February 19, 2011 at 11:53 AM James a descriptive, passionate write, love it.. Hope your weekend's a great one :-)

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2011 at 9:03 AM Passionate..Sara

Robert Pettit February 18, 2011 at 5:40 PM James, this is an impressive set of rhyming couplets. This has been a pleasure to read.

Diane Locksley February 17, 2011 at 3:22 PM This poem is so vivid and passionate, James. Are all the romantic men in Scotland? Best to you, Diane

Diane Locksley February 17, 2011 at 3:21 PM This poem is so vivid and passionate, James. Are all the romantic men in Scotland? Best to you, Diane

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 17, 2011 at 12:38 AM Ooh wowee, James-- truly alluring indeed! This couplet of yours is captivating, almost made me feel like I was intruding in this very sensual dream of yours...;)

C.C Bloomsfield February 16, 2011 at 10:49 PM i think after the crimson lips in magnetic trance,you did a burning bonfire :)with roaring flames.Sensual spicy dream indeed :)

Carrie Richards February 16, 2011 at 2:00 PM Not only is your heart racing....but the reader will find his/her heart racing....okay...time to take a deep breath before we pass out!!! Alluring this is!!