Haiku 6

pale moonlight 
tints the silent garden--
raindrops glisten

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Charmaine Chircop

March 27, 2013 at 1:43 AM

just a very beautiful haiku dear..keep them coming

Charmaine Chircop

March 27, 2013 at 1:42 AM

just a very beautiful haiku dear..keep them coming

Painted Hunter

March 26, 2013 at 9:58 AM

How'd I miss this one? ....excellent haiku. It feels cool and gentle. Love it. Are you the haiku ninja in your parka?..haha. Also I tried my hand at prose, but honestly, I have no idea what I'm doing.

Jack Jordan

March 26, 2013 at 9:15 AM

I'm so glad Spring is here. Your haiku is the antidote to winter's grayness. Jack

Jeremy Martin

March 25, 2013 at 8:41 PM

Shimmering write. I love haiku, they are so small but so complex and lovely in their smallness. You really delivered with this one.

Connie Gildersleeve

March 25, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Beautiful spring Hauki you've penned my dear. I do hope spring has sprung. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

March 25, 2013 at 10:52 AM

WOW! You get better at these haikus every single time! If this is not the best haiku I have read, it sure is close, so into the favourites it goes. Have a great day!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 24, 2013 at 5:02 PM

Dear Heather, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. This a Perfect Haiku (my favourite form) Have YOU ever been up to my cabin in the Green Mountains of Vermont, maybe springtime last year? I have seen this Superbly done Haiku one evening in my Garden Excellent Pen. Into by favourites. I just read Harry Horsman's Winning POEM "Living POETRY" I noticed YOU commented on it before he WON.Are YOU going to send Congrats.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry