Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Sonnet

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Friday night the weekend begins for most
Mothers, Fathers, with family members host
To be together with those they LOVE most
While a lonely man speaks with his Wife's ghost

On my computer the POETRY site
Saturday mornings some comments I write
My former students all work through the night
An old man see's his Wife's Heavenly Light

After Church, there is my A A meeting
Forlorn lonesomeness,now takes a beating
I get home; Featured POETS; I'm greeting
Images of my lovely Wife : Fleeting

Monday, a new week, new POEMS I shall start
I pick up my quill and write from my Heart

Author's note: Dear Andrea, all lines have 10 syllables(Thanks for the Spelling)
I still have to work on the format - aabb- This looks like aaaa but it's not ; a -  just happens to rhyme with - b -

I Envy the Weekend

Friday night the weekend begins for most
Mothers, Fathers, with family members host
To be together with those they LOVE most
While a lonely man speaks with his Wife's ghost

On my computer the POETRY site
Saturday mornings some comments I write
My former students all work through the night
An old man see's his Wife's Heavenly Light

After Church, there is my A A meeting
Forlorn lonesomeness,now takes a beating
I get home; Featured POETS; I'm greeting
Images of my lovely Wife : Fleeting

Monday, a new week, new POEMS I shall start
I pick up my quill and write from my Heart

Author's note: Dear Andrea, all lines have 10 syllables(Thanks for the Spelling)
I still have to work on the format - aabb- This looks like aaaa but it's not ; a -  just happens to rhyme with - b -

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Donald Williams April 12, 2013 at 9:52 AM lol I love this write up, great work with your quill sir. Just stopping by to read some of your work.

Poet Destroyer A April 11, 2013 at 6:22 PM I like my sweet daughters comment on your poem.. Stopping by to say hi, and thank you for the lovely notes. enjoyed your precious poem again...Linda

Royal Ninja April 10, 2013 at 1:34 PM that's how i see life there are people that have more to look forward to, simple life is not for me, but I look forward to writing and letting out my emotions, I enjoyed your write, I wanted to thank you for your words of comfort on my write Angel Wings I truly take comfort in my memories from all my doctor appointments thanks to you I remember the joy of hearing my sons heartbeat or watching him move on the screen, I thank you..., hugs-x, Royal

Poet Destroyer A April 10, 2013 at 10:27 AM many go on with life and others are still coping, a deep write,... always p.d.

Colleen Bono April 10, 2013 at 8:59 AM I hope all is well for you.Hope I havent done something to make you mad,havent heard from you.Have a good one.

Suzanne Delaney April 5, 2013 at 11:13 PM This a love poem in monorhyme time that goes directly to the heart..... wish I was your 24/7 nurse watching the spruce pines lifting their skirts above the lake.....wishing you moonlight to write by tonight you adorable man. Sleep well you are the light of encouragement in my eyes. SOUP MAIL coming. SuZ

Barbara Gorelick April 5, 2013 at 8:18 PM who are you? this is not HG...BG

Colleen Bono April 2, 2013 at 5:35 PM awesome.have been entering a few contest.struggling with life but fighting to win.hope all is well.take care

James Peranteau March 31, 2013 at 7:22 PM A wonderfully touching write dear poet ! And a pleasure to read you ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

Toquyen Harrell March 31, 2013 at 5:07 PM Beautiful write, Harry. I hope you are enjoying this beautiful Easter Sunday! Love ya, Toquyen

Karen Anglesey March 31, 2013 at 3:08 PM We have somethng in common. We seem to have and unrequited love ghost hovering around us. I love the lines in this one also. Very caprivating

Phyllis Babcock March 30, 2013 at 2:01 PM Life sometimes can be lonely even if we are busy. A lovely poem. Wishing you a very Happy Easter . love phyl

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2013 at 10:31 PM Hi Harry, thank you for everything , stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 28, 2013 at 6:37 AM Hi bro , a lot of feeling in this one xx soup to follow

Harry Horsman March 26, 2013 at 10:42 AM you are amazing Harry, through your poetry you touched me,,, thank you....

Sukmawati Komala March 25, 2013 at 9:29 AM HI dear friend :) i would like to say my thanks to you dropping by.. appreciate so much :) and here i am to enjoy your wonderful penned,.. thank you so much for sharing such a great work :) <3 Sk

Sara Kendrick March 25, 2013 at 6:34 AM Cute note to Andrea...Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..I don't have time to do but so much on the internet..What I do takes up a large portion of my time..I try to return comments, congrats to those who are in a contest with me, and sometimes I just look at who is on the site and comment then sometimes I go to see who is new to the site..Some days I hardly have time to come on..Soup mail soon..Sara

Donna Jones March 24, 2013 at 9:55 PM Harry I have never met anyone so devoted to their love before..it brings tears....Donna

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2013 at 2:49 PM This is very nice. I like the personal touch and how you discuss those things that make up your daily life, HG. You don't have to worry about pleasing me with syllable counts and rhyme scheme. There are plenty of places online that teach one how to do a classic sonnet, but if you ever have a question on anything, just soupmail me. Yes, I call this a modern sonnet!