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At the Gate of Dreamland

I know you are there On the other side Waiting anxiously for me There at Dreamland’s Gate So I close my eyes tight To hurry myself to you Hoping sleep comes quickly To carry me to your arms Which are reaching through the portals… Ready, anxious, longing To envelope me And whisk me away To places that are forbidden to us On this side… Distance Commitments Obligations Keep us apart And so we rendezvous In enchanted Dreamland! There…I see you! And I run into your arms And I feel the warmth of your breath On my neck And the strength of your arms Around me And I hear your voice Whispering in my ear… “I thought you’d never come!” And I let you lead me Through the flower strewn pathways The profusion of vibrant colors Are dizzying in their beauty Their fragrance heady You hurry me on To a secluded spot Beside a murmuring stream An enclosed garden Hemmed in by weeping willows trees Their branches- the curtains that you sweep aside As you carry me in And lay me down on the bed of love You’ve prepared I gasp for breath As I realize for the past moments I’ve been holding it all in Afraid I’ll awaken! I look up at you Drinking in your beauty I caress your face, my fingers Running along your full lips As my body Slowly melts At hearing your pledge of love Flowing like the voice of the stream Promising that you’ve forsaken all others And I’m the only one THE ONLY ONE… Who makes you feel truly alive Who makes your heart beat quicken And ignites the fire in your soul I try to speak But I’m silenced by your kiss Tender… Sweet… A questioning kiss And so my lips speak to you In a language my voice cannot “You’re the ONE! Take me…here now… Take me…do with me what you please… Do all that as young lovers we were Deprived of doing because they tore us apart! Here…now…my love, make up for lost time I’m yours!” You pull away and look into my eyes Wanting to be absolutely sure Satisfied by what you see You start to undress me To claim me You do with me what you please With no living soul to hear I cry out your name in throes of ecstasy Again and again Till I am spent… You run your hands through My damp hair Waiting for me To resurface My eyes flutter open to see Your smile of victory Of possession Of love realized…finally! And I smile, contentedly… Knowing…. That though you will never be mine, We are in a place that no one can invade This place is ours On the other side of Dreamland’s Gate Is our secret meeting place Ours… Now and forever Every time I close my eyes!

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Date: 2/21/2016 8:29:00 AM
If all dreams were like this there would be little desire to wake up.
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Date: 2/1/2015 8:15:00 PM
This is beautiful...with awesome expressions and admirable imagery. "Beside a murmuring stream An enclosed garden Hemmed in by weeping willows trees" That sounds like a lovely secluded area..surrounded by nature and that special someone. Definitely a winning piece! :) Always, Laura
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Date: 6/1/2013 12:07:00 AM
Eileen, Now I can say how Inspirational this poem is to me as I am on Poetrysoup now. I am doing a Quatern for you.As long as I put Quotation Marks on your lines in the Quatern and do a footnote saying the quotation lines are Eileen's words from this Poem "At the Gate of Dreamland" is that ok? Respectfully Flipper
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 7:59:00 AM
WELCOME!!!! Glad you are here! Yes...that is fine! I'd love to see what you have written! :)
Date: 5/26/2013 2:17:00 AM
Wow,,,, very, very nice Eileen, I see why you won and I see why Richard wrote his ;} going to fav's for sure ;}
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 8:00:00 AM
Wow! Thanks, Debbie! I'm so happy that you stopped by and that you liked this! :) Hugs!
Date: 5/9/2013 10:48:00 PM
You shouldn't be surprised at the result you are truly amazing.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thank you for believing in me, Richard. :)
Date: 5/9/2013 7:11:00 PM
Well well...this hotty won top honors....congratulations my dearest...so proud
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2013 7:59:00 AM
DM....it means thew world to me that you are there for me! I do love you so much! :) Wish ....wish I could meet you someday. Wouldn't that be grand?
Date: 5/9/2013 5:50:00 PM
Who was afraid to do the contests, who was it, who was it, was it you eh, was it you eh lol, Congratulations my Desert Orchid, wonderful. Take care, Richard
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Richard D Seal
Date: 5/10/2013 12:52:00 PM
Panic? scared you won't have enough puff to blow out all those candles eh lol
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2013 7:58:00 AM
T'was I, my dear, t'was I. :) I love the Desert Orchid term of endearment, Richard. I read up on it and I like all that it stands for. Though it isn't your favorite flower...I like it just the same! :) Agony Aunt is also cute...but makes me feel a little old! With my BDAY coming up this month....I'm already in a state of panic! ;)
Date: 5/9/2013 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful free verse. I hung on each word. Congratulations!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2013 7:55:00 AM
Hung on each word? Music to my ears, Elizabeth! Thanks! :)
Date: 5/9/2013 10:05:00 AM
Well I like to think I'm open-minded... haha. It's like reading for me. I don't mind a couple romances going on in the story, some of it can be really moving. But if the whole story THRIVES off it, it doesn't hold my attention. Luckily poems aren't 300 - 500 pages novels, so I can take pleasure from them, no matter if they are super-romantic. And as far as "tea" goes... I LOVE IT! I remember one year I literally drank tea everyday without fail... 'tis good for the soule methinks :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 10:48:00 AM
;) Well, the exact opposite rings true for me. Romance is the main thing...the rest is just the embellishments! :) We all are different, aren't we? Thank God for that. Yes...tis good for the soul, me friend! Aye! ;) BTW....I'm great at doing accents! When my students are losing interesting...I teach in an Indian...Russian...British....and southern drawl. ;)
Date: 5/9/2013 12:28:00 AM
It must be obvious that I'm a fan of your work, by now. These overly romantic pieces aren't my cup of tea, but I read them because I know YOU know how to make them captivating. I don't think I'll ever write something this intimate until I literally experience it for myself.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:54:00 AM
Sometimes I wonder at myself for writing them, Timothy. I have a moment of..."Girl, what were you thinking??" But, I do believe in romance and passion and love. That's what makes the world go round, Timothy. I'm glad you read my work though it isn't your cup of tea....Perhaps you can learn to appreciate the flavor? ;) Hugs
Date: 5/8/2013 9:13:00 PM
Eileen, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:52:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. This brought lots of joy to my morning! :)
Date: 5/8/2013 8:46:00 PM
Dear Eileen, I'm going to do something the Chef has told us we can not do when we proxy for him. I am going to Favor this POEM, All but the part of never being together is exactly how the Chef feels about his Angel LENORE. So I don't know what to say but this is a Perfect Poem I am going to copy it and take it to Harry tomorrow. You have got me pumped up on Your. I plan on reading more. Your Poetry admirer, Flipper
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:52:00 AM
I'm so please that you like my work, Flipper! Thanks ever so much for the look into Chef's life. Please check HIS mail...I've responded. :)
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 5/8/2013 8:50:00 PM
Dear Eileen, Soup Mail -Flip
Date: 5/8/2013 8:21:00 PM
You had me at the title! Way to go last minute entry straight to the top. Another for my favorites.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:50:00 AM
This is a thrill for me, Richard. I must admit...from the very beginning when I met you, you did encourage me to join the contests several times. I'm glad I was finally able to overcome my fear and jump right in! Thanks for the support. :) About the Favs...I'm sure you don't have as many of mine as I have of yours! Terzanelle...your strong point! My favorite type!
Date: 5/8/2013 7:26:00 PM
Very steamy write here Eileen and beautifully written, you little minx, it's deffo a WoWer. loved it. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:23:00 AM
Um....so let me get this right, Richard. I spew forth thunder and lighting...drench everyone...and cause steam? Isn't that the job of the sun? ;) Teasing ya! Thanks for your support, Richard. It's such a joy to read your posts.
Date: 5/8/2013 6:16:00 PM
Loved this poem congrats on your win!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:12:00 AM
I'm so so honored that you picked mine! How can I thank you? This brings me great joy and satisfaction. I'm glad I threw caution to the wind and joined! :)
Date: 5/8/2013 4:58:00 PM
Hey sweetie...been very busy...love this latest dreamy fantasy lovey......dovey......Gooie....yummmy ..poem....hugs....MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:11:00 AM
Oh dear MD....I've been busy too. I have a guest staying over. Don't worry...I know you won't forget me! Love ya!
Date: 5/8/2013 4:03:00 PM
Wooof.. quite a journey through the alley of imagination... your writings have an immense liveliness that swiftly take me in!!! ... Although we live in a world that hushes many things, but no one can muffle the loud voice of the mind ;D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:11:00 AM
Yes, my dear. Very true, isn't it? Glad you liked it, my dear Guru Jad. I'm waiting to hear where your imagination takes you.
Date: 5/8/2013 1:10:00 PM
EILEEN!.....very steamy indeed! I may have to take my wife on a picnic this afternoon......hahaha....naw, too hot and too many bugs crawling on my bare.........legs. ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:09:00 AM
Oh Caleb....the creepy crawlies will stay away due to the extreme heat! They would get fried! So....don't worry about your....legs! :) It...I mean they are safe.
Date: 5/8/2013 12:17:00 PM
Whew!!! Making love under the leaves of a willow tree must be the ultimate experience. Love this hottie, Eileen. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:19:00 PM
Hottie! ;) I was once, my dear! I was once! Now I'm a hottie in my mind...and...well, hmmmm...better quiet while I'm ahead. Love ya!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:19:00 PM
Good grief...that was better quit quit while I'm ahead. Honestly sometimes....
Date: 5/8/2013 10:47:00 AM
I had posted this poem before, but removed it for various reasons. However, it is so dear to my heart that I am putting it back up here. Hope you enjoy it, everyone! Hugs!
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
- Sounded like a really beautiful place ..... just love and peace. - Like this very much Eileen. - Thank you! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 10:59:00 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise! You are a sweetheart!

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