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Where Is Your Chirping

grievous becomes feels 
every time hear shouting heart squalling 
about his broken beauty of nature 
mountain and valley whimpering 
because of  slovenliness
humankind  hunt living needs 
and forget his beauty of natural 

i fear for 
loss of morn’s  chirping
beautiful song from my sweet birds
I seldom heard them all

maybe you confused
where should you step your feet 
might you fret 
saw  your shade trees broken  
shattered growled

sick  of your heart 
was so heartfelt
perhaps i  worried
to lose your beautiful chirping

you need the trees 
beautiful environtment
you need to shade
and  i need your beautiful chirping

no more fella 
you pickaback
with fret the woody stem 
to the city 
to the country

it is the ideal places 
for my birds to sing
yearning always 
where is your chirping

(c)Sukmawati komala
16 February 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/9/2013 11:40:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, What a Wonderful POEM about Nature,Birds, and a slam against the Eco-system, Mankind is destroying. Cleverly Written POETIC MasterPiece. Into my Favourites.LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/18/2013 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful, I love poems about nature, especially birds. please read mine Feather beauty bright.
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:18:00 PM
this is amazing Sukmawati, wonderful poetry...
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