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Lamentable You

Hell seemed to encompass the land As I watched him holding your hand For a moment I was happy for you And then my shameful heart gave way Earth longed to suck me in its waters Above fellow demons and their hollers We rue the day we ever existed Longing for the touch of human flesh We were trained to eat at your souls To fill your poor deprived holes With filth and emaciated sin Slithering within…bellowing within… And when I look at him I know he’s yours I should have seen it coming of course You never wanted a nothing like me And someone is to blame I see The voices in your head made you cower You once were awed by my power But now the beauty of love has destroyed us I am nothing, and he is yours Take her you bastard of a fool! I don’t need anyone, for I will rule I will rule over her vessel And mark me, she will detest you! Remarkable as she is you will leave her While I in the darkness keep her But for now I’ll lie in wait For the perfect time to ensnare Let go of his hands And allow this heart a chance Let the man lose his compass Only to stumble upon a new woman Oh, lamentable you! I force your love to be true Kiss me, my hate—my love, you fool! He’s never coming back for you! Because you are not special You belong to nobody—nothing! And you shall find That you were always… MINE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2012 9:54:00 PM
Dear Laura, WOW, Powerful Write"Kiss me my hate--my LOVE, you fool!" I've read this a couple of Times; into my Favorites LOVE YOU Laura, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/21/2011 11:02:00 PM
Quite a write here as it delivers a powerful message to that certain someone.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/25/2012 10:23:00 PM
perspective*
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/25/2012 9:36:00 PM
Just so everyone's wondering...the poem is in the perpective and viewpoint of a demonic emnity that is attached to a woman.

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