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Four Hours of Eternity - 3

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I believe this really happened, It was so real.
I woke to the sound of sizzling bacon, the aroma of fresh baked Muffins and my Beautiful Lenore in her bright green Teddy. "Nubbies", I said, "what time is it." Lenore said" for You it is 3:30P.M., June 27th, 2013. You are in the O.R. at Dartmouth Hospital. For me it is time to bring YOU to Eternity for a short time."What are You talking about; Baby." I died last night before we had time to go to the Bridal Suite. I do not want You to go through that pain again. Please come with me to the railing on the starboard side of the ship."Below the shuffle board deck?""Nubbies, just trust me." As we walked outside, I noticed there was no air,no breeze, no sea lapping against the side of the boat, the sun seemed pasted in the sky. Where is Mom and Dad;where's my Ma, Where is everybody? Harry we are frozen in time, for last night and today; never happened for you. I asked the Lord to give us this time together. I was 3 months pregnant when I said "I DO" I want you to see JoAnne Naomi Grow up. Now Full Moonlight Stand on the railing with me and when I say 3; Jump. 1, 2, 3. You would think we would plummet into the Caribbean Sea, but we splashed into the Full Moon. The sun was warm,the birds sat on my shoulders, singing a song of Life Forever. The Peace, Serenity and Tranquility was unearthly. I then saw GOD and the Son of Salvation hugged me and in a Mezmerizing Voice said Welcome Home. To be Continued I want to apologize to those of YOU who are punctuationally bound to Poetry I do not know how to punctuate people talking. I know I'm suppose to use "" marks Sorry I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

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Date: 12/20/2013 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful work, as always, Harry. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:37:00 PM
I like it, Harry! To be continued? Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!
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Date: 11/22/2013 7:47:00 PM
Hello friend.I really hope you are doing well.I had to move out after 27 yrs of faith,its his house.I bought a 5th wheel.31ft with 2 slide outs.huge.I spent the night tuesday and wed night but wed things got to me and I took alot of pills.(30).I have a cyst behind my ear drum that has staph infection and it is to the mastoid bone.I have to have surgery.Take care,always thinking about you. Love Colleen
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:53:00 PM
I just love this one, punctuation be damned, this is a fine piece of writing. You my friend have skills. Straight to my favorites.
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:31:00 PM
Oh what a delightful wonderful ending Harry...blessings always to you...may all your dreams be filled with such beauty.....always..Donna
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hg..How are you dear papa..So deeply missed.Glad to see your post..This poem misted my eyes cause once again it took me to you and your loving lenore and the baby to be..Im sure they re with you from heaven.
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:38:00 PM
HG, it's always a treat to see you on Soup. I am sorry for your difficulty in writing comments. It must be so hard. Can you get some software that allows you to just speak and the computer types the words for you? I hope you are doing ok other than that. I remember the story of your sad wedding day. You must think of it a lot. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2013 2:35:00 PM
I have to believe it was very real. So detailed in the experience that it could not be fiction. Just so wonderfully described.
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:44:00 PM
Glad i drop by, Harry really like this....
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:05:00 PM
Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.
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Date: 10/5/2013 9:18:00 PM
Hello Super SOUPERS. I wrote a quick note in "About this POEM" I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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