Oh Vulturous World

Note:***This poem is meant to be read from the bottom to the top, left to right 
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Never Again
and you remain—

For the World has gone from me and fled
The stairway of my mind shall never end
I accept the fate with the grinning dead
Hello again demons, hello friends

I remain

Alas! I fall and I am done
Tell me where have you fled, my love, my friend?
For a moment I gaze upon the sun
Here I am on earth again

1 Stair Remains

Why can’t I be free?
Tell me, why aren’t they looking at thee?
Why are they looking at me?

2 Stairs Remain

The garments of comfort I long to wear 
Knowing in my heart that I’ll never win 
I skip that grimy third stair
Like most of my life has been

3 Stairs Remain

Though my infected feet leave bloodstains
I can’t release even a single tear
The poisons encompass my river of veins
I step on thorns of wrath and fear
Enshrouded with pain!

4 Stairs Remain

Oh, how am I to survive?
Relieve me from this ever-fixed sadness
Why can’t you just be alive? 
Cease this madness!

5 Stairs Remain

As you breathe your very last breath
The devilish fiends laugh at me
They are blaming me for your death
The deaths of the masses are calling me

6 Stairs Remain

The carcasses you feed upon are glaring
Oh! vulturous world so full of greed
When everyone is staring
God, redeem me!
I just can’t succeed

7 Stairs Remain

Of other fiendish sins
And I feel the shivers 
Drowned by the turbulent wind
My stale breath quivers

8 Stairs Remain

Though we all aren’t free
They laugh below in the hole where I fell
The demons are haunting, taunting me
Alone I wander blindly out of hell

9 Stairs Remain

And my will is close to gone…
The stairway continues on
Forever hungry, forever stale
I toil through death’s dark vale

10 Stairs Remain

Why can’t we be free?
My resistance is nearly gone
The wretches are watching, stalking me
I’m too exhausted to move on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Esquire Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 11:23 AM
My Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Once again I climb the Stairs of Life and Death, Good and Evil. Once again my Spirit is stumbling on my own weaknesses Up and Down. A favorite of mine. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Carter Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 1:49 PM
I've never climbed a poem before. Very good.
Arnone Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:44 AM
It was, sort of, like going down a staircase (to Hell and back?). Interesting and nicely worded. ;-)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Dark and hold the suspense, well penned. Congrats!
Bordner Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Such dark distress, you, a Mistress of the unblessed, yet the journey of spirit must progress stained Poetess...to me this is an allegory of reincarnation, you, a beautiful and tormented traveler of Time's ruthless steps Laura. Very profound, edifying are your poetic pains. "Alone I wander blindly out of hell..." J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:21 AM
<3<3<3 How sweet of you to delve into my older posts... thanks sweetheart. Love you! ~Laura
Beaufort Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 6:43 PM
Yes, it is cool reading from bottom to top. Such massive guilt is present here. Did I ever mention a theory of guilt? Guilt is anger and hurt that are not expressed, and which is turned inward against us. Hard to believe it, but the feeling of being stared at conjures this up. Nice ending also. Back to the bottom. You have captured the essence of a bad day at the grave site. I hope you are well. Sounds like you are from your latest comments. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving next week!!
Esquire Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 8:31 PM
Dear Laura, Blessings, As I said earlier I have writers block Your POETRY is Extremely Influential, this POEM is written by a Genious POETESS. I Bow to YOU, Laura I offer YOU the "GOLDEN QUILL of POETRY" ( an Imaginary Honor Lenore and I made up for each other ) Upon YOUR head a Wreath of Laurel for YOUR Laureatus POETRY LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR LIEGE...Harry
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 11:16 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Laura. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 11:23 AM
An awesome write here Laura!Congrats on your win!!
Rozario Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 1:41 PM
This is very cool indeed... congrats Laura!
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 4:14 AM
impressive, laura... sending you my congrats and huggs! ;)
Williams Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:18 AM
Laura congrats on your win..David
Song Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Dang, originality with a T! Gotta read this one several times...Great format and image of coming up from the depths of hell. WOW!!!! You are awesome! Gwendolen
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 11:40 AM
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!
K. Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Hi Laura! this was one poem which truly made me wonder who wrote it...I read your note and got smitten. I read it from the bottom up and also got curious, I read it top to bottom and was just equally amazed....This is just wonderfully crafted, and also haunting! I felt like I was going through those stairs, just an amazing read!! Thank you so much for entering this awesome poem in my contest and super congrats to you! :D
Esquire Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Dear Laura, Every time before I start commenting on YOUR Fantastic POETRY I Read THIS "ART of POETRY" A Tapestry designed by an Immeccable POETIC Mind I Also read this from top to bottom and read a completely Different POEM I adore YOUR Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
Esquire Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Dear Laura, This is Just so Beautiful, but I think I would Like YOU to Climb 10 Stairs to Glory Which I will SOUP MAIL to YOU when it's done It's completely Inspired by YOU with this POETIC ART " Oh Vulturous World " read backwords I would however put it like this"Oh Vulturous World "(read backwords) otherwise it looks like read backwards is part of the Title to Many a new POET ( no age barrier for a NEW POET ) YOU are so clever and Talented that should read and Teach other POETS LOVE YOU~Harry
Esquire Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Dear Laura, I'm so intrigued Soup Mail Call LOVE YOUR Superb Pen...Harry
Esquire Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Dear Laura, I am at a lost for words This is the most Amazing POETRY I have Read I must ask Did YOU go to a special Literary School?? YOU have raised some long forgotten Memories of my Mind I can feel the Darkness of this POEM I will come back to this POEM later YOU are Phenominal LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
Breidenthal Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 12:48 AM
Thank you very much for the suggestion, but unfortunately, the site won't let me use characters like parenthesis in my title. I would if I could though! Always, Laura
Carlson Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:10 PM
YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!...I'M JEALOUS
Wayne Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Great form and a chilling read.
Peranteau Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Well dear poet, these have been...an explosive set of writes for the 27th of 5-11 ! And I am truly amazed ! Have a wonderful weekendzzzz...much love, james
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Beautify verses with fine steps looking at the realities of life, Laura
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