Before Death - After Life

Before Death With pain and sorrow, I share my bed I cry to know that I am dead Empty tears Forever shed Eons of Eternity The sins of passion Lust and deceit Can only End in Death After Life Walking the rainbows, talking with GOD God's Loving Heart, He shares with me Destiny - Eternity Eons of Forever His Love, Light, Life: shines Thank-YOU JESUS GOD's Glory LENORE LIFE Dedicated to Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen AUTHOR NOTE: Two concepts in one POEM With the same Form I have several more in Haiku, Senryu, Crystalline, and Quatern

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/21/2013 5:37:00 PM

I love your capacity to express so vividly the meaning of life after death. Such a wonderful expression

Hidden Sister

Date: 4/7/2013 10:05:00 PM

This was magical. J.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/2/2013 4:35:00 PM

Death, life, our soul lives on forever and we must remember to give thanks each and every day. Two sides to this poem. Thank you for reading my earlier works. Have a wonderful weekend. love phyl

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2013 11:04:00 PM

Tnks for sharing with us the feeling of death..Yep ..but mostly tnk for sharing with us what follows..the beauty of life..which is as you well described eternal..Cos our soul never dies..Tnks for stopping by.You re in my daily perayers Leige and you re my soup family too.Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2012 5:59:00 PM

Very nice, HG. are you really good friends with Dane ann. I have not seen her for ages. I sure hope she is well.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 12/22/2012 3:42:00 PM

Passion lust and deceit, wow.. Harry what have you been up to :) enjoyed your wonderful poem, love Elizabeth

Kash Poet

Date: 12/22/2012 11:34:00 AM

Love the way you have penned the two concepts of Death and life here HG.Enjoyed your poem.